From f4835ed6ad3d808c4f06cd109e657120e8f22fb5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Xi Ruoyao <xry111@xry111.site>
Date: Tue, 8 Aug 2023 08:35:21 +0800
Subject: pkgconf: Reword the reason of sed

Specifying --modversion with multiple packages just does not make sense.
The real problem here is it's erroring out even if the multiple
arguments are for the same package.
---
 chapter08/pkgconf.xml | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter08')

diff --git a/chapter08/pkgconf.xml b/chapter08/pkgconf.xml
index 8c1031b14..7a9569178 100644
--- a/chapter08/pkgconf.xml
+++ b/chapter08/pkgconf.xml
@@ -44,10 +44,11 @@
 
     <title>Installation of Pkgconf</title>
 
-    <para>Pkgconf 2.0.0 explicitly errors when attempting to run
-           --modversion with multiple packages. This breaks many
-           packages in BLFS. Run this sed to reinstate the old 
-           output for pkgconf.</para>
+    <para>Pkgconf-2.0.0 explicitly errors when attempting to run
+    <option>--modversion</option> with multiple arguments, even if these
+    arguments are constraints for the same package.  This breaks many
+    packages in BLFS. Run this sed to reinstate the old
+    output for pkgconf:</para>
 
      <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i '/1330,1336/s|^|//|' cli/main.c</userinput></screen>
 
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