From 1422130085ebfa2674217107518bd12a8895bd00 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Manuel Canales Esparcia <manuel@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Sun, 19 Dec 2004 19:08:13 +0000
Subject: Dropped/updated the text in unstable - Chapter01, 02 and 09.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@4423 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 chapter09/getcounted.xml |  4 ++++
 chapter09/reboot.xml     | 18 +++++++++---------
 chapter09/theend.xml     |  2 ++
 chapter09/whatnow.xml    |  4 ++++
 4 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

(limited to 'chapter09')

diff --git a/chapter09/getcounted.xml b/chapter09/getcounted.xml
index 4eeaa7b74..24ae18c7b 100644
--- a/chapter09/getcounted.xml
+++ b/chapter09/getcounted.xml
@@ -7,6 +7,9 @@
 <title>Get Counted</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="getcounted.html"?>
 
+<para>See testing</para>
+
+<!--
 <para>Want to be counted as an LFS user now that you have finished the
 book? Head over 
 to <ulink url="&lfs-root;cgi-bin/lfscounter.cgi"/> and 
@@ -14,5 +17,6 @@ register as an LFS user by entering your name and the first LFS version
 you have used.</para>
 
 <para>Let's reboot into LFS now...</para>
+-->
 
 </sect1>
diff --git a/chapter09/reboot.xml b/chapter09/reboot.xml
index 96969a9d4..018b13f8f 100644
--- a/chapter09/reboot.xml
+++ b/chapter09/reboot.xml
@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@
 <title>Rebooting the system</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="reboot.html"?>
 
-<para>Now that all of the software has been installed, it is time to reboot
-your computer. First exit from the chroot environment:</para>
+<para>Now that all of the software has been installed, it is time to
+reboot the computer. First exit from the chroot environment:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>logout</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -20,25 +20,25 @@ umount $LFS/dev
 umount $LFS/proc
 umount $LFS/sys</userinput></screen>    
 
-<para>And unmount the LFS file system:</para>
+<para>Unmount the LFS file system itself:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>umount $LFS</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>If at the start you decided to create multiple partitions, you'll need to
-unmount the other partitions before unmounting the main one, like this:</para>
+<para>If multiple partitions were created, unmount the other
+partitions before unmounting the main one, like this:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>umount $LFS/usr
 umount $LFS/home
 umount $LFS</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Now reboot your system with:</para>
+<para>Now, reboot the system with:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>
 
 <para>Assuming the Grub boot loader was set up as outlined earlier, the menu
-is set to boot <emphasis>LFS &milestone;</emphasis> automatically.</para>
+is set to boot <emphasis>LFS &version;</emphasis> automatically.</para>
 
-<para>When the reboot is complete, your LFS system is ready for use and you
-can start adding your own software.</para>
+<para>When the reboot is complete, the LFS system is ready for use and
+software can be added.</para>
 
 </sect1>
diff --git a/chapter09/theend.xml b/chapter09/theend.xml
index c29cc6f8a..8099c8cf9 100644
--- a/chapter09/theend.xml
+++ b/chapter09/theend.xml
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
 <indexterm zone="ch-finish-theend"><primary sortas="e-/etc/lfs-release">/etc/lfs-release</primary></indexterm>
 
+<!--
 <para>Well done! You have finished installing your LFS system. It may have
 been a long process, but we hope it was worth it. We wish you a lot of fun
 with your new shiny custom built Linux system.</para>
@@ -17,6 +18,7 @@ with your new shiny custom built Linux system.</para>
 file. By having this file it is very easy for you (and for us if you are going
 to ask for help with something at some point) to find out which LFS version
 you have installed on your system. Create this file by running:</para>
+-->
 
 <screen><userinput>echo &version; &gt; /etc/lfs-release</userinput></screen>
 
diff --git a/chapter09/whatnow.xml b/chapter09/whatnow.xml
index 4bc76c04a..50e48d63f 100644
--- a/chapter09/whatnow.xml
+++ b/chapter09/whatnow.xml
@@ -7,6 +7,9 @@
 <title>What now?</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="whatnow.html"?>
 
+<para>See testing</para>
+
+<!--
 <para>We thank you for reading the LFS Book and hope that you've found this
 book useful and worth your time.</para>
 
@@ -41,5 +44,6 @@ of HOWTOs, Guides and man pages; it may be found at
 <ulink url="http://www.tldp.org/"/>.</para></listitem>
 
 </itemizedlist>
+-->
 
 </sect1>
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