From 72033583eb677b863c84eb1454a20ee4ddbcd46e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Thomas Balu Walter <tw@itreff.de>
Date: Sun, 18 Mar 2001 19:30:50 +0000
Subject: You

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 <title>Part I - Introduction</title>
 
 <para>
-Part One gives you general information about this book (versions, where
+Part One gives general information about this book (versions, where
 to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and how to get in touch with me).
-It also explains a few important aspects you really want and need to
-read before you start building an LFS system.
+It also explains a few important aspects a user really wants and needs to
+read before starting to build an LFS system.
 </para>
 
 </sect2>
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