From 493d6b55bd4a2bd8893eaf25e912d1cee2de6c9a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@linuxfromscratch.org>
Date: Mon, 8 Jun 2020 22:40:40 +0000
Subject: Text updates in preface for cross2

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/cross2@11908 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
---
 prologue/why.xml | 17 ++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

(limited to 'prologue/why.xml')

diff --git a/prologue/why.xml b/prologue/why.xml
index 4b1b263e1..ca100e1f9 100644
--- a/prologue/why.xml
+++ b/prologue/why.xml
@@ -118,8 +118,7 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>DejaGNU</para>
 
-        <para>This package contains a framework for testing other programs.
-        It is only installed in the temporary toolchain.</para>
+        <para>This package contains a framework for testing other programs.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -141,8 +140,9 @@
       <listitem revision="sysv">
         <para>Eudev</para>
 
-        <para>This package is a device manager.  It dynamically controls the entries
-        in the /dev directory as devices are added or removed from the system.
+        <para>This package is a device manager.  It dynamically controls the ownership,
+        permissions, names, and symbolic links of devices in the /dev directory as 
+        devices are added or removed from the system.
         </para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
         <para>File</para>
 
         <para>This package contains a utility for determining the type of a
-        given file or files. A few packages need it to build.</para>
+        given file or files. A few packages need it in their build scripts.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>Glibc</para>
 
-        <para>This package contains the main C library.  Linux programs would
+        <para>This package contains the main C library.  Linux programs will
         not run without it.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>Pkg-config</para>
 
-        <para>This package provides a program to return meta-data about an
+        <para>This package provides a program that returns meta-data about an
         installed library or package.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -558,8 +558,7 @@
         <para>Tcl</para>
 
         <para>This package contains the Tool Command Language used
-        in many test suites in LFS packages.  It is only installed in
-        the temporary toolchain.</para>
+        in many test suites in LFS packages.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
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