Named the hint authors, updated the URL to the editors in the hints index, and mentioned the Gawk patch to avoid confusion.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@1969 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

7 files changed, 34 insertions, 16 deletions

diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml
index d0a18db2e..7af4fa03b 100644
--- a/chapter01/changelog.xml
+++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml
@@ -6,6 +6,22 @@
 
 <itemizedlist>
 
+<listitem><para>June 5th, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 09 - Rebooting
+the system: named the hint author.</para></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>June 5th, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 06 - Vim:
+updated the hint URL.</para></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>June 5th, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 06 - LILO:
+named the hint authors.</para></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>June 5th, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 06 - Bootscripts:
+named the hint author.</para></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>June 5th, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 05 - Gawk:
+mentioned that the patch will be applied in Chapter 06. The
+patch caused some confusion.</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para>June 3rd, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 01 - FAQ: edited
 to include reporting typos.</para></listitem>
 
diff --git a/chapter05/gawk-inst.xml b/chapter05/gawk-inst.xml
index 47e2438c0..e5f97ae6d 100644
--- a/chapter05/gawk-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter05/gawk-inst.xml
@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Installation of Gawk</title>
 
-<para>Install Gawk by running the following commands:</para>
+<para>We will apply a patch to Gawk in Chapter 6. Install Gawk by
+running the following commands:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>CPPFLAGS=-Dre_max_failures=re_max_failures2 \
 ./configure --prefix=$LFS/static --disable-nls &amp;&amp;
diff --git a/chapter06/bootscripts-inst.xml b/chapter06/bootscripts-inst.xml
index ec71964d1..36866b93d 100644
--- a/chapter06/bootscripts-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter06/bootscripts-inst.xml
@@ -2,9 +2,10 @@
 <title>Installation of LFS-Bootscripts</title>
 
 <para>We will be using SysV style init scripts. We have chosen this style
-because it is widely used and we feel comfortable with it. If you want to
-try something else, someone has written an LFS-Hint on BSD style init
-scripts at <ulink url="&hints-root;bsd-init.txt"/>.</para>
+because it is widely used and we feel comfortable with it. If you would
+prefer to try something else, Marc Heerdink has written a hint about BSD
+style init scripts, which may be found at
+<ulink url="&hints-root;bsd-init.txt"/>.</para>
 
 <para>If you decide to use BSD style, or some other style scripts, you can
 skip chapter 7 when you arrive at it and move on to chapter 8.</para>
diff --git a/chapter06/lilo-inst.xml b/chapter06/lilo-inst.xml
index 6ec96cd40..c0915fef0 100644
--- a/chapter06/lilo-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter06/lilo-inst.xml
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <title>Installation of Lilo</title>
 
 <para>We have chosen Lilo as a boot loader because we feel comfortable with it, but you 
-may wish to choose another. Someone has written a hint on 
-GRUB at <ulink url="&hints-root;grub-howto.txt"/>.</para>
+may wish to choose another. Fabio Fracassi has written a hint on 
+GRUB, which is available at <ulink url="&hints-root;grub-howto.txt"/>.</para>
 
 <para>Install Lilo by running the following commands:</para>
 
@@ -20,9 +20,9 @@ message stating that /sbin/lilo has to be executed to complete the
 update. Don't do this, as it has no use: the /etc/lilo.conf isn't present
 yet. We will complete the installation of lilo in chapter 8.</para>
 
-<para>Maybe you'll be interested to know that someone wrote a hint on 
-how to get a logo instead of the standard LILO prompt or menu. Take 
-a look at it at <ulink url="&hints-root;bootlogo.txt"/>.</para>
+<para>The standard LILO prompt, or menu, may be replaced by the
+LFS logo, or any logo you like. Martin Imobersteg has written a
+hint about this, which is located at 
+<ulink url="&hints-root;bootlogo.txt"/>.</para>
 
 </sect2>
-
diff --git a/chapter06/vim-inst.xml b/chapter06/vim-inst.xml
index 67b86fc58..5514109b4 100644
--- a/chapter06/vim-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter06/vim-inst.xml
@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ commands.</para>
 <para>If you don't like vim to be installed as an editor on your LFS system,
 you may want to download an alternative and install the editor you 
 prefer. There are a few hints on how to install different editors
-available at <ulink url="&hints-root;"/>.  Currently there are hints 
-for Emacs, joe, and nano.</para>
+available at <ulink url="http://hints.linuxfromscratch.org/hints.shtml#editors"/>. 
+Currently there are hints for Emacs, joe, and nano.</para>
 
 <para>Install Vim by running the following commands:</para>
 
diff --git a/chapter09/reboot.xml b/chapter09/reboot.xml
index 788e43160..5e98ae189 100644
--- a/chapter09/reboot.xml
+++ b/chapter09/reboot.xml
@@ -39,8 +39,8 @@ on LFS active:</para>
  
 <para><screen><userinput>/sbin/lilo</userinput></screen></para>
  
-<para>If you are wondering: "Well, where to go now?" you'll be glad to
-hear that someone has written an LFS hint on the subject at <ulink
+<para>If you are wondering "what do i do now?", then you will be glad to
+know that Max Schattauer has written a hint on this subject at <ulink
 url="&hints-root;afterlfs.txt"/>.  On a similar note, if you are not 
 only a newbie to LFS, but also to Linux in general, you may 
 find the newbie hint at <ulink url="&hints-root;newbie.txt"/> very 
diff --git a/index.xml b/index.xml
index 84bd32e7f..84d02257c 100644
--- a/index.xml
+++ b/index.xml
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
 
 <!ENTITY book SYSTEM "book/book.xml">
 
-<!ENTITY version "20020604">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "June 4th, 2002">
+<!ENTITY version "20020605">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "June 5th, 2002">
 
 <!ENTITY ftp-root "ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">
 <!ENTITY http-root "http://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">