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| author | David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com> | 2022-09-21 15:53:38 -0500 |
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| committer | David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com> | 2022-09-21 15:53:38 -0500 |
| commit | 925414842a22430356ca8b89393588ad05154fe9 (patch) | |
| tree | 20c21e6c7c46af437421ce40d3e87497fe7f148d | |
| parent | 17a807a99fd23346d2e8012ee4b5d57481f54790 (diff) | |
Corrected English idiom, fixed some typos in chapter 2.3 (Stages)
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter02/stages.xml | 14 |
1 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/chapter02/stages.xml b/chapter02/stages.xml index 7c151975f..71f388df5 100644 --- a/chapter02/stages.xml +++ b/chapter02/stages.xml @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ </sect2> <sect2> - <title>Chapter 5–6</title> + <title>Chapters 5–6</title> <itemizedlist> <listitem> @@ -44,8 +44,8 @@ <listitem> <para>These two chapters <emphasis>must</emphasis> be done as user <systemitem class="username">lfs</systemitem>. - A <command>su - lfs</command> needs to be done before any task in these - chapters. Failing to do that, you are at risk of installing packages to the + A <command>su - lfs</command> comand must be issued before any task in these + chapters. If you don't do that, you are at risk of installing packages to the host, and potentially rendering it unusable.</para> </listitem> @@ -54,13 +54,13 @@ are critical. If there is any doubt about installing a package, ensure any previously expanded tarballs are removed, then re-extract the package files, and complete all - instructions in that section.</para> + the instructions in that section.</para> </listitem> </itemizedlist> </sect2> <sect2> - <title>Chapter 7–10</title> + <title>Chapters 7–10</title> <itemizedlist> <listitem> @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ <listitem> <para>A few operations, from <quote>Changing Ownership</quote> to - <quote>Entering the Chroot Environment</quote> must be done as the + <quote>Entering the Chroot Environment</quote>, must be done as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user, with the LFS environment variable set for the &root; user.</para> </listitem> @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ <listitem> <para> When entering chroot, the LFS environment variable must be set for <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>. The LFS - variable is not used afterwards.</para> + variable is not used after entering the chroot environment.</para> </listitem> <listitem> |