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authorTimothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org>2003-01-18 23:34:48 +0000
committerTimothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org>2003-01-18 23:34:48 +0000
commitda849d1599efeba4198e32d16e54bf1ef1bab9a6 (patch)
tree8127bee22dd5eab2eb9f314033ec68abe07200b1
parentf8a5e31df6c7e691bc9092def3ae306796169108 (diff)
Grammatic changes to chapter 6.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2390 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
-rw-r--r--chapter06/creatingdirs.xml7
-rw-r--r--chapter06/flex-inst.xml2
-rw-r--r--chapter06/gcc-inst.xml2
-rw-r--r--chapter06/zlib-inst.xml2
4 files changed, 4 insertions, 9 deletions
diff --git a/chapter06/creatingdirs.xml b/chapter06/creatingdirs.xml
index 6d129b586..3763bf202 100644
--- a/chapter06/creatingdirs.xml
+++ b/chapter06/creatingdirs.xml
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ directory of root, and another to the directories for temporary files.</para>
<para><screen><userinput>chmod 0750 /root &amp;&amp;
chmod 1777 /tmp /var/tmp</userinput></screen></para>
-<para>The first mode change ensures that not just everybody can enter the
+<para>The first mode change ensures that not just anybody can enter the
<filename class="directory">/root</filename> directory -- the same
as a normal user would do with his or her home directory.
The second mode change makes sure that any user can write to the
@@ -39,11 +39,6 @@ The second mode change makes sure that any user can write to the
cannot remove other users' files from them. The latter is prohibited
by the so-called "sticky bit" -- the highest bit in the 1777 bit mask.</para>
-<para>Now that the directories are created, move the source tarballs that
-were downloaded in Chapter 3 to some subdirectory under
-<filename class="directory">/usr/src</filename> (you
-will have to create the desired subdirectory yourself).</para>
-
<sect2>
<title>FHS compliance note</title>
diff --git a/chapter06/flex-inst.xml b/chapter06/flex-inst.xml
index 92634e350..45fe52ab2 100644
--- a/chapter06/flex-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter06/flex-inst.xml
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
<para><screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen></para>
-<para>There are which packages expect to find the flex library
+<para>There are packages which expect to find the flex library
in the <filename>/usr/lib</filename> directory. Create a symlink
to account for this:</para>
diff --git a/chapter06/gcc-inst.xml b/chapter06/gcc-inst.xml
index 9c6f3aa62..d89713d24 100644
--- a/chapter06/gcc-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter06/gcc-inst.xml
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ is implemented.</para></listitem>
<para><screen><userinput>make bootstrap</userinput></screen></para>
<para>The <emphasis>bootstrap</emphasis> target doesn't just compile GCC, but
-it compiles GCC a multiple times. It uses the first compiled programs to
+it compiles GCC multiple times. It uses the first compiled programs to
compile itself a second and third time to make sure the compiler was compiled
properly.</para>
diff --git a/chapter06/zlib-inst.xml b/chapter06/zlib-inst.xml
index 94c901644..ebddcdc56 100644
--- a/chapter06/zlib-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter06/zlib-inst.xml
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ shared and static libraries:</para>
<filename>/lib</filename> directory. That way, in the event
that you must boot without the <filename>/usr</filename>
directory, vital system programs will still have access to
-the library. Finish installing shared library:</para>
+the library. Finish installing the shared library:</para>
<para><screen><userinput>mv /usr/lib/libz.so.* /lib</userinput></screen></para>