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authorTimothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org>2002-10-06 15:50:25 +0000
committerTimothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org>2002-10-06 15:50:25 +0000
commit6a9875daac5d3c5dd0c3623a7a5587947bb90147 (patch)
treea1229c1f27aa707d0c08bf9643c091280f052d16 /appendixa/bootscripts-desc.xml
parent6b8e9e97de1965df7a820d90943385f2e06696d6 (diff)
Applied Bill Maltby's grammatic-fixes patch.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2164 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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diff --git a/appendixa/bootscripts-desc.xml b/appendixa/bootscripts-desc.xml
index 228ca79ea..6aaa3f42b 100644
--- a/appendixa/bootscripts-desc.xml
+++ b/appendixa/bootscripts-desc.xml
@@ -17,12 +17,12 @@ systems).</para></sect4>
<sect4><title>cleanfs</title>
<para>The cleanfs script removes files that shouldn't be preserved between
-reboots, such as /var/run/*, /var/lock/*, it re-creates /var/run/utmp and
-removes the possible present /etc/nologin, /fastboot and /forcefsck
+reboots, such as /var/run/* and /var/lock/*. It re-creates /var/run/utmp and
+removes the possibly present /etc/nologin, /fastboot and /forcefsck
files.</para></sect4>
<sect4><title>functions</title>
-<para>The functions script contains shared functions among different
+<para>The functions script contains functions shared among different
scripts such as error checking, status checking, etc.</para></sect4>
<sect4><title>halt</title>
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@ scripts such as error checking, status checking, etc.</para></sect4>
network devices.</para></sect4>
<sect4><title>loadkeys</title>
-<para>The loadkeys script loads the proper keymap table that matches your
-keyboard layout.</para></sect4>
+<para>The loadkeys script loads the keymap table you specified as proper for
+your keyboard layout.</para></sect4>
<sect4><title>localnet</title>
<para>The localnet script sets up the system's hostname and local loopback
@@ -48,11 +48,11 @@ or aren't network based.</para></sect4>
<para>The mountproc script is used to mount the proc filesystem.</para></sect4>
<sect4><title>network</title>
-<para>The network script sets up network interfaces (such as network cards)
+<para>The network script sets up network interfaces, such as network cards,
and sets up the default gateway where applicable.</para></sect4>
<sect4><title>rc</title>
-<para>The rc script is the master runlevel control script which is
+<para>The rc script is the master runlevel control script. It is
responsible for running all the other scripts one-by-one in a specific
sequence.</para></sect4>
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ the hardware clock isn't set to GMT time.</para></sect4>
partitions.</para></sect4>
<sect4><title>sysklogd</title>
-<para>The sysklogd script start and stops the system and kernel log
+<para>The sysklogd script starts and stops the system and kernel log
daemons.</para></sect4>
<sect4><title>template</title>