Some more You-Fixes

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@331 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

1 files changed, 8 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/appendixa/introduction.xml b/appendixa/introduction.xml
index a8d2d5087..609a8a17b 100644
--- a/appendixa/introduction.xml
+++ b/appendixa/introduction.xml
@@ -27,15 +27,16 @@ chapter 5 (Intel system) or chapter 11 (PPC systems).
 <para>
 Most information about these packages (especially the descriptions of
 it) come from the man pages from those packages. I'm not going to print
-the entire man page, just the core elements to make you understand what
-a program does. If you want to know full details on a program, I suggest
-you start by reading the complete man page in addition to this appendix.
+the entire man page, just the core elements to make it possible to understand
+ what
+a program does. To get knowledge of all details on a program, I suggest
+to start by reading the complete man page in addition to this appendix.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-You will also find that certain packages are documented more in depth
-than others. The reason is that I just happen to know more about certain
-packages than I know about others. If you have anything to add on the
+Certain packages are documented more in depth
+than others, because I just happen to know more about certain
+packages than I know about others. If anything should be added on the
 following descriptions, please don't hesitate to email me. This list is
 going to contain an in depth description of every package installed, but
 I can't do this on my own. I have had help from various people but more
@@ -44,7 +45,7 @@ help is needed.
 
 <para>
 Please note that currently only what a package does is described and not
-why you need to install it. That will be added later.
+why it needs to be installed. That will be added later.
 </para>
 
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