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authorMark Hymers <markh@linuxfromscratch.org>2001-10-27 14:58:42 +0000
committerMark Hymers <markh@linuxfromscratch.org>2001-10-27 14:58:42 +0000
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<title>Introduction</title>
<?dbhtml filename="introduction.html" dir="appendixa"?>
-<para>This appendix describes the following aspect of each and every package
+<para>This appendix describes the following aspects of every package
that is installed in this book:</para>
<itemizedlist>
-<listitem><para> What every package contains</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>What the package contains.</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para> What every program from a package does</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>What each program from a package does.</para></listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<para>The packages are listed in the same order as they are installed in
-chapter 5 (Intel system) or chapter 11 (PPC systems).</para>
+chapter 5 and chapter 6.</para>
<para>Most information about these packages (especially the descriptions of
-it) come from the man pages from those packages. I'm not going to print
-the entire man page, just the core elements to make it possible to understand
- what
-a program does. To get knowledge of all details on a program, I suggest
-to start by reading the complete man page in addition to this appendix.</para>
-
-<para>Certain packages are documented more in depth
-than others, because I just happen to know more about certain
-packages than I know about others. If anything should be added on the
-following descriptions, please don't hesitate to email me. This list is
-going to contain an in depth description of every package installed, but
-I can't do this on my own. I have had help from various people but more
-help is needed.</para>
+then) come from the man pages from those packages. We are not going to print
+the entire man page, just the core elements to make it possible to
+understand what a program does. To get knowledge of all details on a program,
+we suggest you start by reading the complete man page in addition to
+this appendix.</para>
+
+<para>Certain packages are documented in more depth
+than others, because we just happen to know more about certain
+packages than I know about others. If anything should be added to the
+following descriptions, please don't hesitate to email the mailing
+lists. We intend that the list should contain an in-depth description
+of every package installed, but we can't do it without help.</para>
<para>Please note that currently only what a package does is described and not
-why it needs to be installed. That will be added later.</para>
+why it needs to be installed. This may be added later.</para>
</sect1>