Applied Alex's grammatic-fixes patch.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2128 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/appendixa/kernel-desc.xml b/appendixa/kernel-desc.xml
index aeb0dd4e7..d08bd8f2b 100644
--- a/appendixa/kernel-desc.xml
+++ b/appendixa/kernel-desc.xml
@@ -11,16 +11,17 @@
 <para>The Linux kernel is at the core of every Linux system. It's what makes
 Linux tick. When a computer is turned on and boots a Linux system, the
 very first piece of Linux software that gets loaded is the kernel. The
-kernel initializes the system's hardware components such as serial
-ports, parallel ports, sound cards, network cards, IDE controllers, SCSI
-controllers and a lot more. In a nutshell the kernel makes the hardware
-available so that the software can run.</para></sect4>
+kernel initializes the system's hardware components: serial ports, parallel
+ports, sound cards, network cards, IDE controllers, SCSI controllers and a
+lot more. In a nutshell the kernel makes the hardware available so that the
+software can run.</para></sect4>
 
 <sect4><title>linux kernel headers</title>
-<para>These are the files we copy to /usr/include/{linux,asm} in chapter
-5.  They should match those which glibc was compiled against and so
-should <emphasis>not</emphasis> be replaced when upgrading the kernel.
-They are essential for compiling many programs.</para></sect4>
+<para>These are the files we copy to
+<filename>/usr/include/{linux,asm}</filename> in chapter 5.  They should
+match those which glibc was compiled against and therefore should
+<emphasis>not</emphasis> be replaced when upgrading the kernel. They are
+essential for compiling many programs.</para></sect4>
 
 </sect3>