Grammar fixes.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@325 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

1 files changed, 16 insertions, 15 deletions

diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml
index 80a7e9941..cae962a7a 100644
--- a/chapter01/changelog.xml
+++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml
@@ -2,8 +2,9 @@
 <title>Changelog</title>
 
 <para>
-If, for example, a change is listed for chapter 5 it (usually) means the 
-same change has been made in the chapters for the other architectures.
+If, for example, a change is listed for chapter 5, it (usually) means the 
+same change has been made in the corresponding chapter for the other
+architectures.
 </para>
 
 <para>
@@ -23,12 +24,12 @@ page recommends cfdisk over fdisk because it's more stable.
 
 <listitem><para>
 Chapter 4: Changed the wording to make it more general as ext2 no
-longer is the only used file system. Reiser for example is often used
+longer is the only used file system. Reiserfs, for example, is often used
 too now.
 </para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>
-Chapter 5: Added static mawk, texinfo and partially gettext to faciliate
+Chapter 5: Added static mawk, texinfo, and partially gettext to faciliate
 the move of Glibc from Chapter 5 to Chapter 6.
 </para></listitem>
 
@@ -37,8 +38,8 @@ Chapter 5: Added Makedev to chapter 5. We don't create the device files
 here, only copy the MAKEDEV script and make a temp copy which will be
 used to create device files. This second file (MAKEDEV-temp) doesn't
 contain user names and group names but only user id's and group id's. We
-need a few device files to get Glibc installed, but before GLibc is
-installed user and group names are not recognized yet; only the numeric
+need a few device files to get Glibc installed, but, before Glibc is
+installed, user and group names are not recognized yet, only the numeric
 id's. This requires a slightly modified MAKEDEV script which will be
 generated by patching the original one. This patching is done here in
 chapter 5. Also, fixed the explanations on both makedev installations.
@@ -50,7 +51,7 @@ su'ed to) user root.
 </para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>
-Chapter 5: Simplified ln commands
+Chapter 5: Simplified ln commands.
 </para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>
@@ -73,22 +74,22 @@ Chapter 5: Beautified the static link process for mawk.
 </para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>
-Chapter 5+6: Upgraded from gcc-2.95.2 to gcc-2.95.2.1
+Chapter 5+6: Upgraded gcc-2.95.2 to gcc-2.95.2.1.
 </para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>
-Chapter 5+6: Moved Glibc from chapter 5 to chapter 6
+Chapter 5+6: Moved Glibc from chapter 5 to chapter 6.
 </para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>
-Chapter 6: Changed libexecdir=/usr/bin in fileutils to libexecdir=/bin
+Chapter 6: Changed libexecdir=/usr/bin in fileutils to libexecdir=/bin.
 </para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>
-Chapter 6: Updated Glibc installation instructions. 'configparms' file
+Chapter 6: Updated Glibc installation instructions. The 'configparms' file
 creation has been deleted. No need to pick a compiler (either distro's
 native or the /usr/local/gcc2952/bin/gcc one); we're in chroot
-now so we'll use the one we have 
+now so we'll use the one we have.
 </para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>
@@ -113,7 +114,7 @@ installation.
 </para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>
-Chapter 6: When entering chroot the $TERM variable inside chroot is set
+Chapter 6: When entering chroot, the $TERM variable inside chroot is set
 properly. This is accomplished by: chroot ... -i HOME=/root TERM=$TERM ...
 </para></listitem>
 
@@ -124,12 +125,12 @@ into one line.
 
 <listitem><para>
 Chapter 6: Changed all "rm file &amp;&amp; ln -s dest file" into 
-"ln -sf file" (in glibc, bzip2 and gzip installation). 
+"ln -sf file" (in glibc, bzip2 and gzip installations). 
 </para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>
 Chapter 7: Fixed the delays in the killproc function in the functions
-script. Now after kill, first check PIDs, then sleep 2 if needed. More
+script. Now, after kill, first check PIDs, then sleep 2 if needed. More
 details can be read in the comments in the script itself.
 </para></listitem>