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 <title>How things are going to be done</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="how.html" dir="chapter01"?>
 
-<para>You are going to build your LFS system by using a previously installed 
-Linux distribution such as Debian, Mandrake, Red Hat, etc. The existing Linux 
-system (host) will be used as a starting point, because you will need programs 
-like a compiler, linker, text editor, and other development tools to build the 
-new system. Ordinarily, the required tools are available by default if you 
-selected <quote>development</quote> as one of your installation options when 
-you installed your Linux distribution.</para>
+<para>You are going to build your LFS system by using a previously installed
+Linux distribution (such as Debian, Mandrake, Red Hat, or SuSE). This existing
+Linux system (the host) will be used as a starting point, because you will need
+programs like a compiler, linker and shell to build the new system. Normally
+all the required tools are available if you selected <quote>development</quote>
+as one of the options when you installed your distribution.</para>
 
-<para>After you have downloaded the packages that make up an LFS system, you 
-will create a new Linux native partition and filesystem. This new Linux 
-partition and filesystem is where your new LFS system will be compiled and 
-installed onto.</para>
+<para>In Chapter 3 you will first create a new Linux native partition and
+filesystem, the place where your new LFS system will be compiled and installed.
+Then in Chapter 4 you download all the packages and patches required to build
+an LFS system, and store them on the new filesystem.</para>
 
 <para>Chapter 5 will then discuss the installation of a number of packages that 
 will form the basic development suite (or tool-set) which is used to build the 
@@ -68,11 +67,11 @@ simply switch to a different VC (Virtual Console) or X desktop and continue
 using the computer as you normally would.</para>
 
 <para>When all the software from Chapter 6 is installed, the temporary tools 
-built in Chapter 5 will be removed. Chapters 7, 8 and 9 will finalize the 
-installation. The bootscripts are setup in Chapter 7, the kernel and boot 
-loader are setup in Chapter 8 and Chapter 9 has some pointers to help you after 
-you finish with the book.  Then, finally, you reboot your computer into your 
-new LFS system.</para>
+built in Chapter 5 are removed. In Chapters 7, 8 and 9 the installation will
+then be finalized. The bootscripts are set up in Chapter 7, the kernel and
+bootloader are set up in Chapter 8, and Chapter 9 has some pointers to help
+you after you finish the book.  Then, finally, you're ready to reboot your
+computer into your new LFS system.</para>
 
 <para>This is the process in a nutshell. Detailed information on the steps you 
 will take are discussed in the chapters and package descriptions as you