You-Fixes

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@329 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

1 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/chapter01/unsubscribe.xml b/chapter01/unsubscribe.xml
index 3588e0d68..97afc9f90 100644
--- a/chapter01/unsubscribe.xml
+++ b/chapter01/unsubscribe.xml
@@ -9,10 +9,10 @@ listname</emphasis> as the subject header of the message.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-You can, if you want, unsubscribe from multiple lists at the same time
-using one email. If you want to do so, write some junk as the
+Multiple lists can be unsubscribed at the same time
+using one email. This is done by writing some junk as the
 subject header, something that isn't a valid command like "hello". Then 
-write the unsubscribe commands in the body of the message. The email 
+the unsubscribe commands come in the body of the message. The email 
 will look like: 
 </para>
 
@@ -28,10 +28,10 @@ unsubscribe alfs-discuss
 </literallayout></blockquote>
 
 <para>
-After you have sent the email, the Listar program will send you an 
-email back requesting a confirmation of your unsubscription
-request. After you have sent back this confirmation email, Listar will 
-send you an email again with the message that you have been unsubscribed 
+After the email was sent, the Listar program will reply with an  
+email requesting a confirmation of the unsubscription
+request. After this confirmation email is sent back, Listar will 
+send an email again with the message that the user has been unsubscribed 
 from the list(s). 
 </para>