Adding some markup, and other brush-ups.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2966 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

1 files changed, 15 insertions, 12 deletions

diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml
index 19ffe8836..e37250537 100644
--- a/chapter01/changelog.xml
+++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml
@@ -104,6 +104,9 @@ fix an extraneous whitespace problem in "tidy generated" web site pages.
 Essentially replace all ocurrences of <para><screen> with
 &lt;screen&gt; (and the matching closing tags).</para></listitem>
 
+<listitem><para>October 9th, 2003 [alex]: Chapter 6 - Basic Networking: Moved
+one half to the Lfs-Utils section, the other half to Perl.</para></listitem>
+ 
 <listitem><para>October 8th, 2003 [alex]: Chapter 8 - Making bootable: Adapted
 the style of the screens, and reworded some paragraphs.</para></listitem>
  
@@ -147,13 +150,13 @@ so removed those too.</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>October 2nd, 2003 [greg]: Chapter 6 - Shadow: Enabled
 MD5 passwords. Closes Bug 600.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>September 27th, 2003 [greg]: Chapter 5 - Expect: Tweak install
-so that redundant scripts are not installed. Chapter 6 - Creating essential
-symlinks: Remove redundant links. Chapter 6 - man: Remove PATH, closes
-Bug 574.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>September 27th, 2003 [greg]: Chapter 5 - Expect: Tweaked
+install so that redundant scripts are not installed. Chapter 6 - Creating
+essential symlinks: Removed redundant links. Chapter 6 - man: Removed PATH,
+closes Bug 574.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>September 27th, 2003 [greg]: Add Tcl, Expect and DejaGnu items
-to Appendix A. Closes Bug 661.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>September 27th, 2003 [greg]: Added Tcl, Expect and DejaGnu
+items to Appendix A. Closes Bug 661.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 26th, 2003 [jeremy]: Added new workaround for the
 devpts problems.</para></listitem>
@@ -167,7 +170,7 @@ the short descriptions, and the content of most of them too.</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>September 22nd, 2003 [greg]: Chapter 8 - Creating the /etc/fstab
 file: Made mounting devpts the default.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>September 22nd, 2003 [jeremy]: Added net-tools patch to fix
+<listitem><para>September 22nd, 2003 [jeremy]: Added Net-tools patch to fix
 mii-tool compilation.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 22nd, 2003 [jwrober]: Chapter 5 - Updated the Why 
@@ -187,8 +190,8 @@ man hint to a pointer to BLFS.</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>September 22nd, 2003 [jeremy]: Added a note to remember to
 mount devpts if you exit and re-enter chroot.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>September 22nd, 2003 [jeremy]: removed make check from patch
-and diffutils, since these tests perform no actions.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>September 22nd, 2003 [jeremy]: Removed make check from Patch
+and Diffutils, since these tests perform no actions.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 22nd, 2003 [greg]: Chapter 5 - Setting up the
 environment: Added unset CC CXX CPP LD_LIBRARY_PATH LD_PRELOAD to
@@ -204,8 +207,8 @@ use of the +h flag to bash.</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>September 19th, 2003 [jwrober]: Various updates to the 
 acknowledgements page.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>September 18th, 2003 [jeremy]: Chapter 5 - GCC Pass 2 -
-added some extra comments regarding the 3 tarballs to unpack.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>September 18th, 2003 [jeremy]: Chapter 5 - GCC Pass 2: Added
+some extra comments regarding the 3 tarballs to unpack.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 17th, 2003 [greg]: Chapter 6 - GCC-2.95.3: Added
 rationale notes.</para></listitem>
@@ -215,7 +218,7 @@ page to match the website.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 17th, 2003 [jeremy]: Upgraded File to 4.04.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>September 17th, 2003 [jeremy]: Chapter 6 - changed 2 of the
+<listitem><para>September 17th, 2003 [jeremy]: Chapter 6 - Changed 2 of the
 occurrences of exec bash --login to include the +h directive. </para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 17th, 2003 [greg]: Chapters 5 and 6 - Locking in