Applied Bill Maltby's grammar patch. Changed $LFS to LFS where appropriate. Internal XML cleanup: removed double spacing where appropriate.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2138 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

5 files changed, 10 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/chapter01/blfssupport.xml b/chapter01/blfssupport.xml
index 52d9f1ec2..c1527a8da 100644
--- a/chapter01/blfssupport.xml
+++ b/chapter01/blfssupport.xml
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <title>blfs-support</title>
 
 <para>The blfs-support list handles support requests for any software
-that is not built or installed in the LFS book.  Any software beyond what is
+that is not built or installed in the LFS book. Any software beyond what is
 installed as part of the base LFS system can be discussed here.</para>
 
 </sect2>
diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml
index 05e954ebf..883839c5e 100644
--- a/chapter01/changelog.xml
+++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml
@@ -59,6 +59,10 @@
 </itemizedlist>
 </para></listitem>
 
+<listitem><para>September 28th, 2002 [timothy]: Applied Bill Maltby's
+grammatic-fixes patch. Changed "$LFS" to "LFS" when speaking of the LFS
+environment variable.</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para>September 23rd, 2002 [timothy]: Applied Bill Maltby's
 grammatic-related patches.</para></listitem>
 
diff --git a/chapter01/conventions.xml b/chapter01/conventions.xml
index 6d5c47399..ab8949f5d 100644
--- a/chapter01/conventions.xml
+++ b/chapter01/conventions.xml
@@ -3,12 +3,12 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="conventions.html" dir="chapter01"?>
 
 <para>To make things easy to follow, there are a number of conventions used
-throughout the book.  Following are some examples:</para>
+throughout the book. Following are some examples:</para>
 
 <para><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr</userinput></para>
 
 <blockquote><para>This form of text is designed to be typed exactly 
-as seen unless otherwise noted in the surrounding text.  It is also used 
+as seen unless otherwise noted in the surrounding text. It is also used 
 in the explanation sections to identify which of the commands is being 
 referenced.</para></blockquote>
 
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ bin:x:1:
 </para>
 
 <blockquote><para>This type of section is used mainly when creating 
-configuration files.  The first command (in bold) tells the system to create 
+configuration files. The first command (in bold) tells the system to create 
 the file $LFS/etc/group from whatever is typed on the following lines until 
 the sequence EOF is encountered. Therefore, this whole section is generally 
 typed as seen.</para></blockquote>
diff --git a/chapter01/lfssupport.xml b/chapter01/lfssupport.xml
index 3f79515c8..83426fdfe 100644
--- a/chapter01/lfssupport.xml
+++ b/chapter01/lfssupport.xml
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <title>lfs-support</title>
 
 <para>The lfs-support mailing list provides support to users building an
-LFS system as far as the end of the main book.  Requests for help with
+LFS system as far as the end of the main book. Requests for help with
 installing software beyond the base system should go to the blfs-support
 list.</para>
 
diff --git a/chapter01/unsubscribe.xml b/chapter01/unsubscribe.xml
index 7872fb85a..e8f94ff76 100644
--- a/chapter01/unsubscribe.xml
+++ b/chapter01/unsubscribe.xml
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ unsubscribe lfs-dev
 unsubscribe blfs-support
 unsubscribe alfs-discuss</literallayout></blockquote>
 
-<para>After the email is sent, the Listar program will reply with an  
+<para>After the email is sent, the Listar program will reply with an
 email requesting a confirmation of the unsubscription
 request. After this confirmation email is sent back, Listar will 
 send an email again with the message that the user has been unsubscribed