Cleaned up my Changelog entries. Removed bin86-exp.xml.

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 <listitem><para>July 3rd, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 06 - Sysvinit: Simplified
 the sed command and updated the installation description because init now
-prints "Sending processes" instead of "Sending all processes". Internal
-change: added &lt;screen&gt; tags to chrootcmd.xml.</para></listitem>
+prints "Sending processes" instead of "Sending all processes".</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>July 2nd, 2002 [markh]: Internal change - Made all
 patches use a &amp;package-patch-version; entity and removed all
@@ -64,22 +63,16 @@ LFS-Bootscripts: Updated package contents.</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>June 23rd, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 05 &amp; 06 - Net-tools,
 Perl, Texinfo, Autoconf, Automake, File, Libtool, Bin86, Vim, Linux, Bison,
 Less, Man-pages, Groff, Bzip2, E2fsprogs, Grep, Lilo, Modutils, Procps,
-Psmisc, Reiserfsprogs: Updated package contents.</para></listitem>
-
-<listitem><para>June 23rd, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 05 &amp; 06 - M4, Bzip2,
-File, E2fsprogs: Added "last checked against" for uniformity.</para></listitem>
-
-<listitem><para>June 23rd, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 05 &amp; 06 - GCC:
-Removed i686-specific programs.</para></listitem>
+Psmisc, Reiserfsprogs: Updated package contents. M4, Bzip2,File, E2fsprogs:
+Added "last checked against" for uniformity. GCC: Removed i686-specific
+programs.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>June 16th, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 06 - Gettext:
 Updated package contents.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>June 14th, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 05 &amp; 06 - Binutils,
-Bzip2, Diffutils, Grep: Updated package contents.</para></listitem>
-
-<listitem><para>June 14th, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 05 &amp; 06 - GCC:
-Updated description of c++filt.</para></listitem>
+Bzip2, Diffutils, Grep: Updated package contents. GCC: Updated description
+of c++filt.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>June 13th, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 09 - The End:
 Changed $LFS/etc/lfs-&version; to $LFS/etc/lfs and put the version
@@ -88,22 +81,13 @@ number inside this file.</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>June 12th, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 05 - GCC:
 Modified the build instructions and command explanations to
 only build the C compiler. The C++ compiler is not needed
-until after the second GCC build.</para></listitem>
-
-<listitem><para>June 12th, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 06 - Shadow:
-Made some grammatic changes.</para></listitem>
+until after the second GCC build. Chapter 06 - Shadow: grammatic
+changes.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>June 11th, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 05 &amp; 06 - Gawk: 
-Created a list of package contents and descriptions.</para></listitem>
-
-<listitem><para>June 11th, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 05 - Fileutils: 
-Removed a confusing paragraph about the fileutils patch, per
-Christophe Devine's request.</para></listitem>
-
-<listitem><para>June 11th, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 05 &amp; 06 - All
-software: Updated the estimated required disk space.</para></listitem>
-
-<listitem><para>June 11th, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 05 &amp; 06 - GCC:
+Created a list of package contents and descriptions. Chapter 05 - Fileutils:
+Removed a confusing paragraph about the fileutils patch. All
+software: Updated the estimated required disk space. GCC:
 Updated the package contents.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>June 9th, 2002 [markh]: Chapter 06 - Creating
@@ -111,28 +95,18 @@ Directories: Changed usr,usr/local to just usr/local as we use the -p
 option to mkdir which will create the usr directory
 anyways.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>June 7th, 2002 [timothy] - Chapter 06 - 
-Reiserfsprogs: added a description for unpack.</para></listitem>
-
-<listitem><para>June 7th, 2002 [timothy] - Chapter 02 - 
-How to ask for help: mentioned the FAQ.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>June 7th, 2002 [timothy] - Chapter 06 - Reiserfsprogs:
+added a description for unpack. Chapter 02 - How to ask for help: mentioned
+the FAQ.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>June 6th, 2002 [markh] - Chapter 05 - Tidy up
 explanations following the /static change.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>June 5th, 2002 [timothy] Preface - Who would
-not want to read this book: applied a revised version of
-Scot's grammar patch.</para></listitem>
-
-<listitem><para>June 5th, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 09 - Rebooting
-the system, Lilo, Bootscripts: named the hint authors.</para></listitem>
-
-<listitem><para>June 5th, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 06 - Vim:
-updated the hint URL.</para></listitem>
-
-<listitem><para>June 5th, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 05 - Gawk:
-mentioned that the patch will be applied in Chapter 06. The
-patch caused some confusion.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>June 5th, 2002 [timothy] Preface - Who would not want to
+read this book: applied a revised version of Scot's grammar patch.
+Chapter 09 - Rebooting the system, Lilo, Bootscripts: named the hint authors.
+Chapter 06 - Vim: updated the hint URL. Chapter 05 - Gawk: to avoid confusion,
+mentioned that the patch will be applied in Chapter 06.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>June 3rd, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 01 - FAQ: edited
 to include reporting typos.</para></listitem>