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author | Timothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2003-01-13 13:26:45 +0000 |
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committer | Timothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2003-01-13 13:26:45 +0000 |
commit | 91b45adcd650bca92b7186aaf4230d8d34c85fff (patch) | |
tree | e0242195463e721f6e492407fb7884533d0d7c9e /chapter01 | |
parent | b8b390a5c18db7dd7c3d393b24b4e45f9d70f2b2 (diff) |
Applied Billy's grammatical patch.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2317 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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-rw-r--r-- | chapter01/acknowledgements.xml | 4 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | chapter01/blfsbook.xml | 4 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | chapter01/blfsdev.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | chapter01/blfssupport.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | chapter01/how.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | chapter01/lfsbook.xml | 4 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | chapter01/lfschat.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | chapter01/lfsdev.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | chapter01/subscribe.xml | 2 |
9 files changed, 12 insertions, 12 deletions
diff --git a/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml b/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml index 8d79a4f51..e4f79671c 100644 --- a/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml +++ b/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ contributions toward the Linux From Scratch project:</para> server.</para></listitem> <listitem><para><ulink url="http://www.valinux.com">VA Linux -Systems</ulink> for providing rackspace and bandwidth for the +Systems</ulink> for providing rack space and bandwidth for the linuxfromscratch.org server.</para></listitem> <listitem><para><ulink url="http://fredan.org">Fredrik Danerklint</ulink> @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ banner.</para></listitem> Benson</ulink> <dean@vipersoft.co.uk> for helping out financially with setting up the LFS non-profit organization.</para></listitem> -<listitem><para>Countless other people on the various LFS mailinglists who are +<listitem><para>Countless other people on the various LFS mailing lists who are making this book happen by giving their suggestions, testing the book and submitting bug reports.</para></listitem> diff --git a/chapter01/blfsbook.xml b/chapter01/blfsbook.xml index 265da2740..3f508d980 100644 --- a/chapter01/blfsbook.xml +++ b/chapter01/blfsbook.xml @@ -2,10 +2,10 @@ <title>blfs-book</title> <para>The blfs-book list is used for coordinating -the BLFS Book's maintenance. +the BLFS book's maintenance. Traffic on it is mostly Bugzilla and CVS commit messages. It is important that all development discussion -of interest to the Book's users take place on blfs-dev, not here.</para> +of interest to the book's users take place on blfs-dev, not here.</para> </sect2> diff --git a/chapter01/blfsdev.xml b/chapter01/blfsdev.xml index c8e6f08d5..1ef1deb36 100644 --- a/chapter01/blfsdev.xml +++ b/chapter01/blfsdev.xml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <sect2> <title>blfs-dev</title> -<para>The blfs-dev list is for discussion of BLFS Book development.</para> +<para>The blfs-dev list is for discussion of BLFS book development.</para> </sect2> diff --git a/chapter01/blfssupport.xml b/chapter01/blfssupport.xml index db437f4c7..6f4799704 100644 --- a/chapter01/blfssupport.xml +++ b/chapter01/blfssupport.xml @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ that might be installed on an LFS system. It does not include topics such as the price of beer, what hardware to buy, -or GNU versus BSD or Microsoft versus Linux flamewars. +or GNU versus BSD or Microsoft versus Linux flame wars. These belong on lfs-chat, and since blfs-support is high traffic, please follow this rule strictly. diff --git a/chapter01/how.xml b/chapter01/how.xml index a990ce7e6..742784930 100644 --- a/chapter01/how.xml +++ b/chapter01/how.xml @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ computer normally.</para> <para>When all the software from Chapter 6 is installed, Chapters 7, 8 and 9 will help us finalize our installation. We will set up our boot -scripts in Chapter 7. In Chapter 8 we will build our final linux kernel and +scripts in Chapter 7. In Chapter 8 we will build our final Linux kernel and set up the Linux boot loader. Chapter 9 has some pointers to help you after you finish the book. Then finally, you reboot your system and boot into your new LFS system, and start to really use it.</para> diff --git a/chapter01/lfsbook.xml b/chapter01/lfsbook.xml index 4735be490..9ffcefa2e 100644 --- a/chapter01/lfsbook.xml +++ b/chapter01/lfsbook.xml @@ -1,10 +1,10 @@ <sect2> <title>lfs-book</title> -<para>The lfs-book list is used for coordinating the LFS Book's maintenance. +<para>The lfs-book list is used for coordinating the LFS book's maintenance. Traffic on it is mostly Bugzilla and CVS commit messages. It is important that all development discussion -of interest to the Book's users take place on lfs-dev, not here.</para> +of interest to the book's users take place on lfs-dev, not here.</para> </sect2> diff --git a/chapter01/lfschat.xml b/chapter01/lfschat.xml index 6a6eb8958..6381c7eda 100644 --- a/chapter01/lfschat.xml +++ b/chapter01/lfschat.xml @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ <para>The lfs-chat list is the place for community chatter. It's a place where anything goes, nothing is off-topic. You can discuss the price of beer or what hardware to buy. -Even GNU versus BSD and Microsoft versus Linux flamewars +Even GNU versus BSD and Microsoft versus Linux flame wars are okay in lfs-chat.</para> </sect2> diff --git a/chapter01/lfsdev.xml b/chapter01/lfsdev.xml index e590c0f08..c1b20f2f2 100644 --- a/chapter01/lfsdev.xml +++ b/chapter01/lfsdev.xml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <sect2> <title>lfs-dev</title> -<para>The lfs-dev list is for discussion of LFS Book development.</para> +<para>The lfs-dev list is for discussion of LFS book development.</para> </sect2> diff --git a/chapter01/subscribe.xml b/chapter01/subscribe.xml index cb8ae422d..38d875568 100644 --- a/chapter01/subscribe.xml +++ b/chapter01/subscribe.xml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <sect2> <title>How to subscribe?</title> -<para>Any of the above-mentioned mailinglists can be subscribed to by sending +<para>Any of the above-mentioned mailing lists can be subscribed to by sending an email to <ulink url="mailto:listar@linuxfromscratch.org">listar@linuxfromscratch.org</ulink> and writing <emphasis>subscribe listname</emphasis> as the subject header of the message.</para> |