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authorTimothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org>2003-01-13 13:26:45 +0000
committerTimothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org>2003-01-13 13:26:45 +0000
commit91b45adcd650bca92b7186aaf4230d8d34c85fff (patch)
treee0242195463e721f6e492407fb7884533d0d7c9e /chapter01
parentb8b390a5c18db7dd7c3d393b24b4e45f9d70f2b2 (diff)
Applied Billy's grammatical patch.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2317 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
Diffstat (limited to 'chapter01')
-rw-r--r--chapter01/acknowledgements.xml4
-rw-r--r--chapter01/blfsbook.xml4
-rw-r--r--chapter01/blfsdev.xml2
-rw-r--r--chapter01/blfssupport.xml2
-rw-r--r--chapter01/how.xml2
-rw-r--r--chapter01/lfsbook.xml4
-rw-r--r--chapter01/lfschat.xml2
-rw-r--r--chapter01/lfsdev.xml2
-rw-r--r--chapter01/subscribe.xml2
9 files changed, 12 insertions, 12 deletions
diff --git a/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml b/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml
index 8d79a4f51..e4f79671c 100644
--- a/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml
+++ b/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ contributions toward the Linux From Scratch project:</para>
server.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para><ulink url="http://www.valinux.com">VA Linux
-Systems</ulink> for providing rackspace and bandwidth for the
+Systems</ulink> for providing rack space and bandwidth for the
linuxfromscratch.org server.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para><ulink url="http://fredan.org">Fredrik Danerklint</ulink>
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ banner.</para></listitem>
Benson</ulink> &lt;dean@vipersoft.co.uk&gt; for helping out financially
with setting up the LFS non-profit organization.</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>Countless other people on the various LFS mailinglists who are
+<listitem><para>Countless other people on the various LFS mailing lists who are
making this book happen by giving their suggestions, testing the book
and submitting bug reports.</para></listitem>
diff --git a/chapter01/blfsbook.xml b/chapter01/blfsbook.xml
index 265da2740..3f508d980 100644
--- a/chapter01/blfsbook.xml
+++ b/chapter01/blfsbook.xml
@@ -2,10 +2,10 @@
<title>blfs-book</title>
<para>The blfs-book list is used for coordinating
-the BLFS Book's maintenance.
+the BLFS book's maintenance.
Traffic on it is mostly Bugzilla and CVS commit messages.
It is important that all development discussion
-of interest to the Book's users take place on blfs-dev, not here.</para>
+of interest to the book's users take place on blfs-dev, not here.</para>
</sect2>
diff --git a/chapter01/blfsdev.xml b/chapter01/blfsdev.xml
index c8e6f08d5..1ef1deb36 100644
--- a/chapter01/blfsdev.xml
+++ b/chapter01/blfsdev.xml
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
<sect2>
<title>blfs-dev</title>
-<para>The blfs-dev list is for discussion of BLFS Book development.</para>
+<para>The blfs-dev list is for discussion of BLFS book development.</para>
</sect2>
diff --git a/chapter01/blfssupport.xml b/chapter01/blfssupport.xml
index db437f4c7..6f4799704 100644
--- a/chapter01/blfssupport.xml
+++ b/chapter01/blfssupport.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ that might be installed on an LFS system.
It does not include topics such as
the price of beer, what hardware to buy,
-or GNU versus BSD or Microsoft versus Linux flamewars.
+or GNU versus BSD or Microsoft versus Linux flame wars.
These belong on lfs-chat,
and since blfs-support is high traffic,
please follow this rule strictly.
diff --git a/chapter01/how.xml b/chapter01/how.xml
index a990ce7e6..742784930 100644
--- a/chapter01/how.xml
+++ b/chapter01/how.xml
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ computer normally.</para>
<para>When all the software from Chapter 6 is installed, Chapters 7, 8 and 9
will help us finalize our installation. We will set up our boot
-scripts in Chapter 7. In Chapter 8 we will build our final linux kernel and
+scripts in Chapter 7. In Chapter 8 we will build our final Linux kernel and
set up the Linux boot loader. Chapter 9 has some pointers to help you after
you finish the book. Then finally, you reboot your system and boot into your
new LFS system, and start to really use it.</para>
diff --git a/chapter01/lfsbook.xml b/chapter01/lfsbook.xml
index 4735be490..9ffcefa2e 100644
--- a/chapter01/lfsbook.xml
+++ b/chapter01/lfsbook.xml
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
<sect2>
<title>lfs-book</title>
-<para>The lfs-book list is used for coordinating the LFS Book's maintenance.
+<para>The lfs-book list is used for coordinating the LFS book's maintenance.
Traffic on it is mostly Bugzilla and CVS commit messages.
It is important that all development discussion
-of interest to the Book's users take place on lfs-dev, not here.</para>
+of interest to the book's users take place on lfs-dev, not here.</para>
</sect2>
diff --git a/chapter01/lfschat.xml b/chapter01/lfschat.xml
index 6a6eb8958..6381c7eda 100644
--- a/chapter01/lfschat.xml
+++ b/chapter01/lfschat.xml
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
<para>The lfs-chat list is the place for community chatter.
It's a place where anything goes, nothing is off-topic.
You can discuss the price of beer or what hardware to buy.
-Even GNU versus BSD and Microsoft versus Linux flamewars
+Even GNU versus BSD and Microsoft versus Linux flame wars
are okay in lfs-chat.</para>
</sect2>
diff --git a/chapter01/lfsdev.xml b/chapter01/lfsdev.xml
index e590c0f08..c1b20f2f2 100644
--- a/chapter01/lfsdev.xml
+++ b/chapter01/lfsdev.xml
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
<sect2>
<title>lfs-dev</title>
-<para>The lfs-dev list is for discussion of LFS Book development.</para>
+<para>The lfs-dev list is for discussion of LFS book development.</para>
</sect2>
diff --git a/chapter01/subscribe.xml b/chapter01/subscribe.xml
index cb8ae422d..38d875568 100644
--- a/chapter01/subscribe.xml
+++ b/chapter01/subscribe.xml
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
<sect2>
<title>How to subscribe?</title>
-<para>Any of the above-mentioned mailinglists can be subscribed to by sending
+<para>Any of the above-mentioned mailing lists can be subscribed to by sending
an email to <ulink url="mailto:listar@linuxfromscratch.org">listar@linuxfromscratch.org</ulink>
and writing <emphasis>subscribe listname</emphasis> as the subject
header of the message.</para>