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| author | Simon Perreault <nomis80@videotron.ca> | 2001-03-22 03:27:52 +0000 |
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| committer | Simon Perreault <nomis80@videotron.ca> | 2001-03-22 03:27:52 +0000 |
| commit | 87c057b51b83070770fe1aa685eec33b6492471b (patch) | |
| tree | 9775c5bd0a39e8fe546e2a6b591043b17cde8e9e /chapter02/commands.xml | |
| parent | 9bfaaaef197beb6a8a7cd288ae3fde65baa6e4ff (diff) | |
Grammar fixes.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@347 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter02/commands.xml | 10 |
1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/chapter02/commands.xml b/chapter02/commands.xml index 36449dce8..cf7392208 100644 --- a/chapter02/commands.xml +++ b/chapter02/commands.xml @@ -5,8 +5,8 @@ LFS Commands is a tarball containing files which list the installation commands for the packages installed in this book. These files can be used to dump to a shell and install the packages, though some files -need to be modified (for example when the console-tools package is -installed it is needed to select the keyboard layout file which can't be +need to be modified (for example, when the console-tools package is +installed, it is needed to select the keyboard layout file, which can't be guessed). </para> @@ -14,9 +14,9 @@ guessed). These files can be used to quickly find out which commands have been changed between the different LFS versions as well. A user just downloads the lfs-commands tarball for this book version and the previous book version -and run a diff on the files. That way it is possible to see which packages +and runs a diff on the files. That way it is possible to see which packages have -updated installation instructions and he can modify his own scripts, or +updated installation instructions, and he can modify his own scripts or reinstall a package if it seems necessary. </para> @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ The lfscommands can be downloaded from <ulink url="http://download.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs-commands/"> http://download.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs-commands/</ulink> or <ulink url="ftp://download.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs-commands/"> -ftp://download.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs-commands/</ulink> +ftp://download.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs-commands/</ulink>. </para> </sect1> |