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authorThomas Balu Walter <tw@itreff.de>2001-03-16 18:06:46 +0000
committerThomas Balu Walter <tw@itreff.de>2001-03-16 18:06:46 +0000
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<title>How to download the software</title>
<para>
-Throughout this document I will assume that you have stored all the
-packages you have downloaded somewhere in $LFS/usr/src.
+Throughout this document I will assume that all the
+packages that were downloaded are placed somewhere in $LFS/usr/src.
</para>
<para>
I use the convention of having a $LFS/usr/src/sources directory.
-Under sources you'll find the directory 0-9 and the directories a
+Under sources I have the directory 0-9 and the directories a
through z. A package as sysvinit-2.78.tar.gz is stored under
$LFS/usr/src/sources/s/ A package as bash-2.04.tar.gz is stored under
-$LFS/usr/src/sources/b/ and so forth. You don't have to follow this
-convention of course, I was just giving an example. It's better to keep
+$LFS/usr/src/sources/b/ and so forth. This convention does not have to be
+followed of course, I was just giving an example. It's better to keep
the packages out of $LFS/usr/src and move them to a subdirectory, so
we'll have a clean $LFS/usr/src directory in which we will unpack the
packages and work with them.
</para>
<para>
-The next chapter contains the list of all the packages you need to download,
+The next chapter contains the list of all the packages that need to be
+downloaded,
but the partition that is going to contain our LFS system isn't created yet.
-Therefore, store the files temporarily somewhere where you want and remember
-to copy them to $LFS/usr/src/ when you have finished the chapter in which
-you prepare a new partition (chapter 4).
+Therefore, the files are temporarily stored somewhere else and later
+copied to $LFS/usr/src/ when the chapter in which
+the new partition is prepared got finished.
</para>
</sect1>