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authorSimon Perreault <nomis80@videotron.ca>2001-03-22 02:58:50 +0000
committerSimon Perreault <nomis80@videotron.ca>2001-03-22 02:58:50 +0000
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Grammar fixes.
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diff --git a/chapter02/download.xml b/chapter02/download.xml
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--- a/chapter02/download.xml
+++ b/chapter02/download.xml
@@ -2,17 +2,17 @@
<title>How to download the software</title>
<para>
-Throughout this document I will assume that all the
+Throughout this document, I will assume that all the
packages that were downloaded are placed somewhere in $LFS/usr/src.
</para>
<para>
I use the convention of having a $LFS/usr/src/sources directory.
-Under sources I have the directory 0-9 and the directories a
+Under sources, I have the directory 0-9 and the directories a
through z. A package as sysvinit-2.78.tar.gz is stored under
-$LFS/usr/src/sources/s/ A package as bash-2.04.tar.gz is stored under
-$LFS/usr/src/sources/b/ and so forth. This convention does not have to be
-followed of course, I was just giving an example. It's better to keep
+$LFS/usr/src/sources/s/. A package as bash-2.04.tar.gz is stored under
+$LFS/usr/src/sources/b/, and so forth. This convention does not have to be
+followed, of course; I was just giving an example. It's better to keep
the packages out of $LFS/usr/src and move them to a subdirectory, so
we'll have a clean $LFS/usr/src directory in which we will unpack the
packages and work with them.
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ downloaded,
but the partition that is going to contain our LFS system isn't created yet.
Therefore, the files are temporarily stored somewhere else and later
copied to $LFS/usr/src/ when the chapter in which
-the new partition is prepared got finished.
+the new partition is prepared has been finished.
</para>
</sect1>