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authorSimon Perreault <nomis80@videotron.ca>2001-03-15 17:08:12 +0000
committerSimon Perreault <nomis80@videotron.ca>2001-03-15 17:08:12 +0000
commita8e58c7e818df0c8a0c1fb44154ea42d836713b5 (patch)
tree8e5915ce003038d39e32bbcf259ac7b8b5eecb6d /chapter02
parent01c82183ade59c2afa08e02365879054fc77650d (diff)
Grammar fixes.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@327 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
Diffstat (limited to 'chapter02')
-rw-r--r--chapter02/bootscripts.xml4
-rw-r--r--chapter02/install.xml14
2 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions
diff --git a/chapter02/bootscripts.xml b/chapter02/bootscripts.xml
index f1595b152..5940a8c1f 100644
--- a/chapter02/bootscripts.xml
+++ b/chapter02/bootscripts.xml
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
<para>
Typing out all the bootscripts in chapters 7 and 9 can be a long tedious
-process, not to mention very error prone.
+process, not to mention very error-prone.
</para>
<para>
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ from <ulink
url="http://download.linuxfromscratch.org/bootscripts/">
http://download.linuxfromscratch.org/bootscripts/</ulink> or <ulink
url="ftp://download.linuxfromscratch.org/bootscripts/">
-ftp://download.linuxfromscratch.org/bootscripts/</ulink>
+ftp://download.linuxfromscratch.org/bootscripts/</ulink>.
</para>
</sect1>
diff --git a/chapter02/install.xml b/chapter02/install.xml
index f9d88461f..985bf2319 100644
--- a/chapter02/install.xml
+++ b/chapter02/install.xml
@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@
<para>
Before you can actually start doing something with a package, you need
to unpack it first. Often you will find the package files being tar'ed and
-gzip'ed (you can determind this by looking at the extension of the file.
-tar'ed and gzip'ed archives have a .tar.gz or .tgz extension for
-example)). I'm not going to write down every time how to ungzip and how
-to untar an archive. I will tell you how to do that once, in this paragraph.
+gzip'ed. (You can determine this by looking at the extension of the file.
+tar'ed and gzip'ed archives have a .tar.gz or .tgz extension, for
+example.) I'm not going to write down every time how to ungzip and how
+to untar an archive. I will tell you how to do that once, in this section.
There is also the possibility that you have the ability of downloading
a .tar.bz2 file. Such a file is tar'ed and compressed with the bzip2 program.
Bzip2 achieves a better compression than the commonly used gzip does. In
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ When you have a file that is tar'ed, you unpack it by running:
When the archive is unpacked a new directory will be created under the
current directory (and this document assumes that you unpack the archives
under the $LFS/usr/src directory). You have to enter that new directory
-before you continue with the installation instructions. So everytime the
+before you continue with the installation instructions. So every time the
book is going to install a program, it's up to you to unpack the source
archive.
</para>
@@ -91,8 +91,8 @@ When you have a file that is gzip'ed, you unpack it by running:
<para>
After you have installed a package you can do two things with it. You can
either delete the directory that contains the sources or you can keep it.
-If you decide to keep it, that's fine by me. But if you need the same package
-again in a later chapter you need to delete the directory first before using
+If you decide to keep it, that's fine with me. But, if you need the same package
+again in a later chapter, you need to delete the directory first before using
it again. If you don't do this, you might end up in trouble because old
settings will be used (settings that apply to your normal Linux system but
which don't always apply to your LFS system). Doing a simple make clean