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| author | David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com> | 2022-09-23 14:57:48 -0500 |
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| committer | David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com> | 2022-09-23 14:57:48 -0500 |
| commit | 81793c6efc67ebcd2e43cf3b9ebc659bbffa17f1 (patch) | |
| tree | d29ced893b44ffc55a828781deda034d82011d1e /chapter03 | |
| parent | 50e70dbc1f572fd7c3c5ca8978e8391fce54480c (diff) | |
Minor changes to verbiage in chapter 3.2 (All Packages)
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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter03/packages.xml | 8 |
1 files changed, 4 insertions, 4 deletions
diff --git a/chapter03/packages.xml b/chapter03/packages.xml index 244c1ed2c..d82e0b4c4 100644 --- a/chapter03/packages.xml +++ b/chapter03/packages.xml @@ -15,14 +15,14 @@ before downloading packages to figure out if a newer version of any package should be used to avoid security vulnerabilities.</para> - <para>The upstreams may remove old releases, especially when these + <para>The upstream sources may remove old releases, especially when those releases contain a security vulnerability. If one URL below is not reachable, you should read the security advisories first to figure out if a newer version (with the vulnerability fixed) should be used. If not, try to download the removed package from a mirror. Although it's possible to download an old release from a mirror even if this release - has been removed because of a vulnerability, it's not recommended to - use a release known to be vulnerable for building your system.</para> + has been removed because of a vulnerability, it's not a good idea to + use a release known to be vulnerable when building your system.</para> </note> <para>Download or otherwise obtain the following packages:</para> @@ -453,7 +453,7 @@ <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&linux-md5;</literal></para> <note> - <para>The Linux kernel is updated relatively often, many times due to + <para>The Linux kernel is updated quite frequently, many times due to discoveries of security vulnerabilities. The latest available <!--&linux-major-version;.&linux-minor-version;.x--> stable kernel version <!--should--> may be |