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author | Timothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2002-09-23 18:35:06 +0000 |
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committer | Timothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2002-09-23 18:35:06 +0000 |
commit | 764d8f4d378f3bb4828e529057b0990297f8e28e (patch) | |
tree | 8395633182130a6606d7336223f974171792f19d /chapter04/introduction.xml | |
parent | 639a66c82c1958d7795167f50e52edfaf3f67962 (diff) |
Applied Bill Maltby's grammatic-fixes patch.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2130 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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diff --git a/chapter04/introduction.xml b/chapter04/introduction.xml index 094b00c74..9ca68e984 100644 --- a/chapter04/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter04/introduction.xml @@ -2,10 +2,10 @@ <title>Introduction</title> <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html" dir="chapter03"?> -<para>Below follows a list of all the packages that you will need to -download in order to build a basic Linux system. The listed version -numbers correspond to versions of the software that are known to work and -which this book is based upon.</para> +<para>Below is a list of packages you need to download for building a +basic Linux system. The listed version numbers correspond to versions +of the software that are known to work, and this book is based +upon them.</para> <para>All the URL's below refer to the main LFS server. There are several FTP mirrors available from which you can download the files as well. The |