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authorTimothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org>2002-09-23 18:35:06 +0000
committerTimothy Bauscher <timothy@linuxfromscratch.org>2002-09-23 18:35:06 +0000
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<title>Introduction</title>
<?dbhtml filename="introduction.html" dir="chapter03"?>
-<para>Below follows a list of all the packages that you will need to
-download in order to build a basic Linux system. The listed version
-numbers correspond to versions of the software that are known to work and
-which this book is based upon.</para>
+<para>Below is a list of packages you need to download for building a
+basic Linux system. The listed version numbers correspond to versions
+of the software that are known to work, and this book is based
+upon them.</para>
<para>All the URL's below refer to the main LFS server. There are several
FTP mirrors available from which you can download the files as well. The