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| author | Thomas Balu Walter <tw@itreff.de> | 2001-03-16 22:10:08 +0000 |
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| committer | Thomas Balu Walter <tw@itreff.de> | 2001-03-16 22:10:08 +0000 |
| commit | 9fffe5fee81c863dcbf5ea425d2cfcc0b6bdaab1 (patch) | |
| tree | a29ea509f569a580b11acbcf67c13c3df73e4110 /chapter04 | |
| parent | 7d90bd3ad9a841e20e060dab886397b6fc8c968e (diff) | |
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diff --git a/chapter04/chapter04.xml b/chapter04/chapter04.xml index f0bd5a88a..2106f1cbb 100644 --- a/chapter04/chapter04.xml +++ b/chapter04/chapter04.xml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ <chapter id="chapter03"> -<title>Packages you need to download</title> +<title>Packages that need to be downloaded</title> &c3-introduction; &c3-packages; diff --git a/chapter04/introduction.xml b/chapter04/introduction.xml index d136d5225..35279ebf0 100644 --- a/chapter04/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter04/introduction.xml @@ -2,11 +2,13 @@ <title>Introduction</title> <para> -Below is a list of all the packages you need to download for building +Below is a list of all the packages that are needed to download for building the basic system. The version numbers printed correspond to versions of -the software that is known to work and which this book is based on. If you -experience problems which you can't solve yourself, download the version that -is assumed in this book (in case you downloaded a newer version). +the software that is known to work and which this book is based on. +If the user +experiences problems which he can't solve himself, he should download the +version that +is assumed in this book (in case he downloaded a newer version). </para> <para> @@ -20,15 +22,15 @@ Version</ulink> We have provided a list of official download sites of the packages below in <ulink url="appendixc.html">Appendix C - Official download locations </ulink>. The LFS FTP archive only contains the versions of packages -that are recommended for use in this book. If you're looking -for newer versions than the ones listed here you can have a look in -Appendix C. +that are recommended for use in this book. Newer versions than the ones +listed here might be found after having a look in Appendix C. </para> <para> Please note that all files downloaded from the LFS FTP archive are files -compressed with bzip2 instead of gz. If you don't know how to handle bz2 -files, please read <ulink url="ch02-install.html">Chapter 2 - How to install +compressed with bzip2 instead of gz. If the user does not know how to +handle bz2 +files, he should read <ulink url="ch02-install.html">Chapter 2 - How to install the software</ulink>. </para> diff --git a/chapter04/packages.xml b/chapter04/packages.xml index af790b07e..21ca0e0f1 100644 --- a/chapter04/packages.xml +++ b/chapter04/packages.xml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ <sect1 id="ch03-packages"> -<title>Packages you need to download</title> +<title>Packages that need to be downloaded</title> <literallayout> |