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authorThomas Balu Walter <tw@itreff.de>2001-03-18 20:39:49 +0000
committerThomas Balu Walter <tw@itreff.de>2001-03-18 20:39:49 +0000
commit137bd506ad66d6c67186a63b30abd3c626e5a66d (patch)
tree9e20183d16e52ccd11c47b5231003415652b98b0 /chapter05
parent72033583eb677b863c84eb1454a20ee4ddbcd46e (diff)
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git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@335 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
Diffstat (limited to 'chapter05')
-rw-r--r--chapter05/kernel-inst.xml2
-rw-r--r--chapter05/proc.xml2
-rw-r--r--chapter05/pwdgroup.xml2
-rw-r--r--chapter05/tar-inst.xml4
4 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/chapter05/kernel-inst.xml b/chapter05/kernel-inst.xml
index 58ed51ea2..2df519021 100644
--- a/chapter05/kernel-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter05/kernel-inst.xml
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ compile package that need the kernel.
</para>
<para>
-Create the kernel configuration file by running the following command:
+The kernel configuration file is created by running the following command:
</para>
<blockquote><literallayout>
diff --git a/chapter05/proc.xml b/chapter05/proc.xml
index 044ccd6c6..6c4ab7d8b 100644
--- a/chapter05/proc.xml
+++ b/chapter05/proc.xml
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ the kernel itself.
</para>
<para>
-Mount the proc file system under $LFS/proc by running the following command:
+The proc file system is mounted under $LFS/proc by running the following command:
</para>
<blockquote><literallayout>
diff --git a/chapter05/pwdgroup.xml b/chapter05/pwdgroup.xml
index db7343aa6..0ed3ded49 100644
--- a/chapter05/pwdgroup.xml
+++ b/chapter05/pwdgroup.xml
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ it needs an entry in the /etc/passwd and /etc/group file. Besides the
group root a couple of other groups are recommended and needed by
packages. The groups with their GID's below aren't part of any standard.
The LSB only recommends besides a group root a group bin to be present
-with GID 1. Other group names and GID's can be chosen by yourself. Well
+with GID 1. Other group names and GID's can be chosen by the user. Well
written packages don't depend on GID numbers but just use the group
name, it doesn't matter all that much what GID a group has. Since there
aren't any standards for groups I won't follow any conventions used by
diff --git a/chapter05/tar-inst.xml b/chapter05/tar-inst.xml
index ae050837f..89914fabf 100644
--- a/chapter05/tar-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter05/tar-inst.xml
@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
<title>Installation of Tar</title>
<para>
-If you want to be able to directly use bzip2 files with tar, use the tar
+To be able to directly use bzip2 files with tar, use the tar
patch avaiable from the LFS FTP site. This patch will add the -y option
-to tar which works the same as the -z option to tar (which you can use
+to tar which works the same as the -z option to tar (which can be used
for gzip files).
</para>