applied Alex's small-edits.patch

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@1961 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/chapter06/lilo-inst.xml b/chapter06/lilo-inst.xml
index c86208ea1..6ec96cd40 100644
--- a/chapter06/lilo-inst.xml
+++ b/chapter06/lilo-inst.xml
@@ -1,10 +1,9 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Installation of Lilo</title>
 
-<para>We have chosen Lilo because we feel comfortable with it, but you 
-may wish to take a look elsewhere. Someone has written a hint on 
-GRUB at <ulink url="&hints-root;grub-howto.txt"/>, an alternative 
-boot loader.</para>
+<para>We have chosen Lilo as a boot loader because we feel comfortable with it, but you 
+may wish to choose another. Someone has written a hint on 
+GRUB at <ulink url="&hints-root;grub-howto.txt"/>.</para>
 
 <para>Install Lilo by running the following commands:</para>
 
@@ -12,17 +11,17 @@ boot loader.</para>
 make install</userinput></screen></para>
 
 <para>It appears that compilation of this package fails on certain machines
-when the -g compiler flag is being used. If you can't compile Lilo at
+when the -g compiler flag is used. If you can't compile Lilo at
 all, you should try to remove the -g value from the CFLAGS variable in the
 <filename>Makefile</filename> file.</para>
 
 <para>At the end of the installation the make install process will print a
 message stating that /sbin/lilo has to be executed to complete the
-update. Don't do this as it has no use. The /etc/lilo.conf isn't present
+update. Don't do this, as it has no use: the /etc/lilo.conf isn't present
 yet. We will complete the installation of lilo in chapter 8.</para>
 
 <para>Maybe you'll be interested to know that someone wrote a hint on 
-how to get a logo instead the the standard LILO prompt or menu. Take 
+how to get a logo instead of the standard LILO prompt or menu. Take 
 a look at it at <ulink url="&hints-root;bootlogo.txt"/>.</para>
 
 </sect2>