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authorGerard Beekmans <gerard@linuxfromscratch.org>2001-08-29 19:50:53 +0000
committerGerard Beekmans <gerard@linuxfromscratch.org>2001-08-29 19:50:53 +0000
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@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
<sect1 id="ch07-hosts">
<title>Creating the /etc/hosts file</title>
-<para>If a network card is to be configured, a user has to decide on the
+<para>If a network card is to be configured, you have to decide on the
IP-address, FQDN and possible aliases for use in the /etc/hosts file. An
example is:</para>
<para><screen>&lt;my-IP&gt; myhost.mydomain.org aliases</screen></para>
-<para>It should made sure that the IP-address is in the private network
+<para>You should made sure that the IP-address is in the private network
IP-address range. Valid ranges are:</para>
<para><screen> Class Networks
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ IP-address range. Valid ranges are:</para>
<para>A valid IP address could be 192.168.1.1. A valid FQDN for this IP could
be www.linuxfromscratch.org</para>
-<para>If a user is not going to use a network card, he still needs to
+<para>If you aren't going to use a network card, you still need to
come up with a FQDN. This is necessary for programs like Sendmail to operate
correctly (in fact; Sendmail won't run when it can't determine the FQDN).</para>
@@ -45,11 +45,10 @@ correctly (in fact; Sendmail won't run when it can't determine the FQDN).</para>
# End /etc/hosts (network card version)
<userinput>EOF</userinput></screen></para>
-<para>Of course, the 192.168.1.1 and www.mydomain.org have to be changed to the
-users
-liking (or requirements if assigned an IP-address by a network/system
-administrator and this machine is planned to be
-connected to that network).</para>
+<para>Of course, the 192.168.1.1 and www.mydomain.org have to be changed
+to your liking (or requirements if assigned an IP-address by a network/system
+administrator and this machine is planned to be connected to that
+network).</para>
</sect1>