Old explanation tells you to create a new file containing, instead of

telling you to create the files by running the command


git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@804 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

15 files changed, 38 insertions, 32 deletions

diff --git a/chapter07/checkfs.xml b/chapter07/checkfs.xml
index 83e854752..60c6bc27f 100644
--- a/chapter07/checkfs.xml
+++ b/chapter07/checkfs.xml
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <title>Creating the checkfs script</title>
 
 <para>
-A new file <filename>/etc/init.d/checkfs</filename> is created containing
-the following:
+Create the <filename>/etc/init.d/checkfs</filename> script by running
+the following command:
 </para>
 
 <para>
diff --git a/chapter07/ethnet.xml b/chapter07/ethnet.xml
index 3659c71d7..f9687161b 100644
--- a/chapter07/ethnet.xml
+++ b/chapter07/ethnet.xml
@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@ If not, this section can be skipped.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-A new file <filename>/etc/init.d/ethnet</filename> is created containing the
-following:
+Create the <filename>/etc/init.d/ethnet</filename> script by running the
+following command:
 </para>
 
 <para>
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ First the nic-config directory is created by running:
 <para>
 
 Now, new files are created in that directory containing the following.
-This creates a sample file ifcfg-eth0:
+The following command creates a sample file ifcfg-eth0:
 </para>
 
 <para>
diff --git a/chapter07/functions.xml b/chapter07/functions.xml
index 37435e23a..f227e444c 100644
--- a/chapter07/functions.xml
+++ b/chapter07/functions.xml
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <title>Creating the functions script</title>
 
 <para>
-A new file <filename>/etc/init.d/functions</filename> is created containing
-the following:
+Create the <filename>/etc/init.d/functions</filename> script by running
+the following command:
 </para>
 
 <para>
diff --git a/chapter07/halt.xml b/chapter07/halt.xml
index f1e93bfd7..962b0cb78 100644
--- a/chapter07/halt.xml
+++ b/chapter07/halt.xml
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <title>Creating the halt script</title>
 
 <para>
-A new file <filename>/etc/init.d/halt</filename> is created containing the
-following:
+Create the <filename>/etc/init.d/halt</filename> script by running the
+following command:
 </para>
 
 <para>
diff --git a/chapter07/hosts.xml b/chapter07/hosts.xml
index 3d8613186..e2a1159ea 100644
--- a/chapter07/hosts.xml
+++ b/chapter07/hosts.xml
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ If a network card is not going to be configured, a new file
 
 <para>
 If a network card is to be configured, a new file
-<filename>/etc/hosts</filename> is created containing:
+<filename>/etc/hosts</filename> is created by running:
 </para>
 
 <para>
diff --git a/chapter07/loadkeys.xml b/chapter07/loadkeys.xml
index 9520e45c2..74da28e9e 100644
--- a/chapter07/loadkeys.xml
+++ b/chapter07/loadkeys.xml
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
 
 <para>
 A user only needs to create this script if he don't have a default 101 keys
-US keyboard layout. A new file 
-<filename>/etc/init.d/loadkeys</filename> containing  the following has to be
-created:
+US keyboard layout. Create the 
+<filename>/etc/init.d/loadkeys</filename> script by running the
+following command:
 </para>
 
 <para>
diff --git a/chapter07/localnet.xml b/chapter07/localnet.xml
index e7d1c7afc..60a5bae68 100644
--- a/chapter07/localnet.xml
+++ b/chapter07/localnet.xml
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <title>Creating the /etc/init.d/localnet boot script</title>
 
 <para>
-A new file <filename>/etc/init.d/localnet</filename> is created containing
-the following:
+Create the <filename>/etc/init.d/localnet</filename> script by running
+the following command:
 </para>
 
 <para>
diff --git a/chapter07/mountfs.xml b/chapter07/mountfs.xml
index 969cac4f5..b6432e022 100644
--- a/chapter07/mountfs.xml
+++ b/chapter07/mountfs.xml
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <title>Creating the mountfs script</title>
 
 <para>
-A new file <filename>/etc/init.d/mountfs</filename> is created containing
-the following:
+Create the <filename>/etc/init.d/mountfs</filename> script by running
+the following command:
 </para>
 
 <para>
diff --git a/chapter07/rc.xml b/chapter07/rc.xml
index 2372755a5..94121acb0 100644
--- a/chapter07/rc.xml
+++ b/chapter07/rc.xml
@@ -3,8 +3,9 @@
 
 <para>
 The first main boot script is the <filename>/etc/init.d/rc</filename> script. 
-A new file <filename>/etc/init.d/rc</filename> is created containing the
-following: </para>
+Create the <filename>/etc/init.d/rc</filename> script by running the
+following command:
+</para>
 
 <para>
 <screen>
diff --git a/chapter07/rcS.xml b/chapter07/rcS.xml
index ca53824a2..d68a7e40c 100644
--- a/chapter07/rcS.xml
+++ b/chapter07/rcS.xml
@@ -2,8 +2,9 @@
 <title>Creating the rcS script</title>
 
 <para>
-The second main boot script is the <filename>rcS</filename> script. Create a 
-new file <filename>/etc/init.d/rcS</filename> containing the following:
+The second main boot script is the <filename>rcS</filename> script. Create  
+the <filename>/etc/init.d/rcS</filename> script by running the following
+command:
 </para>
 
 <para>
diff --git a/chapter07/reboot.xml b/chapter07/reboot.xml
index 4fb352722..b65c1ebc9 100644
--- a/chapter07/reboot.xml
+++ b/chapter07/reboot.xml
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <title>Creating the reboot script</title>
 
 <para>
-Create a new file <filename>/etc/init.d/reboot</filename> containing the
-following:
+Create the <filename>/etc/init.d/reboot</filename> script by running the
+following command:
 </para>
 
 <para>
diff --git a/chapter07/sendsignals.xml b/chapter07/sendsignals.xml
index 30d48ac7d..28a306ffa 100644
--- a/chapter07/sendsignals.xml
+++ b/chapter07/sendsignals.xml
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <title>Creating the sendsignals script</title>
 
 <para>
-Create a new file <filename>/etc/init.d/sendsignals</filename>
-containing the following:
+Creat the <filename>/etc/init.d/sendsignals</filename> script by running
+the following command:
 </para>
 
 <para>
diff --git a/chapter07/setclock.xml b/chapter07/setclock.xml
index 4821459ad..613c39323 100644
--- a/chapter07/setclock.xml
+++ b/chapter07/setclock.xml
@@ -15,9 +15,13 @@ the /etc/localtime symlink.
 
 <para>
 If you want to use this script on your system even if the 
-hardware clock is set to GMT, then the UTC variable below has to be changed
- to the
-value of <emphasis>1</emphasis>.
+hardware clock is set to GMT, then the UTC variable below has to be 
+changed to the value of <emphasis>1</emphasis>.
+</para>
+
+<para>
+Creat the <filename>/etc/init.d/setclock</filename> script by running
+the following command:
 </para>
 
 <para>
diff --git a/chapter07/sysklogd.xml b/chapter07/sysklogd.xml
index b794f8fd1..81feb1e79 100644
--- a/chapter07/sysklogd.xml
+++ b/chapter07/sysklogd.xml
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <title>Creating the sysklogd script</title>
 
 <para>
-A new file <filename>/etc/init.d/sysklogd</filename> is created containing
-the following:
+Create the <filename>/etc/init.d/sysklogd</filename> script by running
+the following command:
 </para>
 
 <para>
diff --git a/chapter07/template.xml b/chapter07/template.xml
index e4f20c36b..72a0b93f7 100644
--- a/chapter07/template.xml
+++ b/chapter07/template.xml
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <title>Creating the template script</title>
 
 <para>
-A new file <filename>/etc/init.d/template</filename> is created containing
-the following:
+Create the <filename>/etc/init.d/template</filename> script by running
+the following command:
 </para>
 
 <para>