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| author | David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com> | 2022-11-21 16:13:06 -0600 |
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| committer | David Bryant <davidbryant@gvtc.com> | 2022-11-21 16:13:06 -0600 |
| commit | 54948b710c6976f5de159da89b8431497e5b7e2f (patch) | |
| tree | c161e171a9f0100e6404534fe640a6e699645402 /chapter08/acl.xml | |
| parent | 651f491b51ea10fbecca8ef646ee17d353cba7e1 (diff) | |
Straighten out capitalization, correct a few grammatical errors,
improve English idiom, clarify a few things, remove superfluous
verbiage, etc.
Diffstat (limited to 'chapter08/acl.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter08/acl.xml | 12 |
1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions
diff --git a/chapter08/acl.xml b/chapter08/acl.xml index 48bf73a75..6702af90f 100644 --- a/chapter08/acl.xml +++ b/chapter08/acl.xml @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ <title/> <para>The Acl package contains utilities to administer Access Control Lists, - which are used to define more fine-grained discretionary access rights for + which are used to define fine-grained discretionary access rights for files and directories.</para> <segmentedlist> @@ -52,11 +52,11 @@ <screen><userinput remap="make">make</userinput></screen> - <para>The Acl tests need to be run on a filesystem that supports access - controls after <application>Coreutils</application> has been built with the - Acl libraries. If desired, return to this package and run <command>make - check</command> after <application>Coreutils</application> has been built - later in this chapter.</para> + <para>The Acl tests must be run on a filesystem that supports access + controls, but not until the <application>Coreutils</application> package has been built, + using the <application>Acl</application> libraries. If desired, return to this package + and run <command>make check</command> after the <application>Coreutils</application> + package has been built.</para> <para>Install the package:</para> |