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| author | David Bryant <david@davidcbryant.net> | 2022-12-20 13:57:22 -0600 |
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| committer | David Bryant <david@davidcbryant.net> | 2022-12-20 13:57:22 -0600 |
| commit | 9c753b58f1db4267ee47a990b118782773dedd96 (patch) | |
| tree | e220a774324c807fe0a7227555e2ea1d580c9008 /chapter08/less.xml | |
| parent | 0785a5e6ddee48b499d6a19e9e17ca0eeea8c393 (diff) | |
Improve English idiom and make additional changes, for clarity.
Rephrased a clumsy sentence. Broke a run-on sentence in two.
Used adverbs, and the possessive case, where necessary.
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