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authorPierre Labastie <pierre.labastie@neuf.fr>2023-03-31 11:01:58 +0200
committerPierre Labastie <pierre.labastie@neuf.fr>2023-03-31 11:03:18 +0200
commit04038ad828fc6299e9392d22c62d535a1940daaa (patch)
tree63b9599c630c5735dd19401319c648618634d333 /chapter08
parentd765208190bef0e078467fcd4c3f094a7744fa93 (diff)
Clarify a sentence in "stripping"
Also fix a typo Report by Rainer Fiebig
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diff --git a/chapter08/stripping.xml b/chapter08/stripping.xml
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@@ -54,10 +54,10 @@
<important>
<para>
- If any package of which the version is different from the version
+ If there is any package whose version is different from the version
specified by the book (either following a security advisory or
satisfying personal preference), it may be necessary to update the
- the library file name in <envar>save_usrlib</envar> or
+ library file name in <envar>save_usrlib</envar> or
<envar>online_usrlib</envar>.
<emphasis role='bold'>Failing to do so may render the system
completely unusable.</emphasis>