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authorAlex Gronenwoud <alex@linuxfromscratch.org>2003-10-22 22:26:46 +0000
committerAlex Gronenwoud <alex@linuxfromscratch.org>2003-10-22 22:26:46 +0000
commit360e2c43cd050de14a654927da9a7610af9e38ce (patch)
treefa36484dc5954a41335c6ec7ddf0b305c020129d /chapter08
parent1612f40eb9f1b8ea766ea308e40d6b3fe14f6fc5 (diff)
Adding some markup and doing miscellaneous shuffles.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@3029 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
Diffstat (limited to 'chapter08')
-rw-r--r--chapter08/fstab.xml13
-rw-r--r--chapter08/grub.xml10
2 files changed, 12 insertions, 11 deletions
diff --git a/chapter08/fstab.xml b/chapter08/fstab.xml
index c52daee44..83ddc1ab3 100644
--- a/chapter08/fstab.xml
+++ b/chapter08/fstab.xml
@@ -32,12 +32,13 @@ end of the line should be replaced with <emphasis>0 0</emphasis>, as such a
partition does not need to be dumped or checked</para>
<para>The <filename>/dev/shm</filename> mount point for tmpfs is included to
-enable POSIX shared memory. Your kernel must have the required support built
-into it for this to work. More about this in the next section. Please note that
-currently, very little software actually uses POSIX shared memory. Therefore you
-can consider the <filename>/dev/shm</filename> mount optional. For more
-information, see <filename>Documentation/filesystems/tmpfs.txt</filename> in the
-kernel source tree.</para>
+allow enabling POSIX shared memory. Your kernel must have the required support
+built into it for this to work -- more about this in the next section. Please
+note that currently very little software actually uses POSIX shared memory.
+Therefore you can consider the <filename>/dev/shm</filename> mount point
+optional. For more information, see
+<filename>Documentation/filesystems/tmpfs.txt</filename> in the kernel source
+tree.</para>
<para>There are other lines which you may consider adding to your
<filename>fstab</filename> file. One example is a line to use if you intend to
diff --git a/chapter08/grub.xml b/chapter08/grub.xml
index 0c59f4eef..6ed20b328 100644
--- a/chapter08/grub.xml
+++ b/chapter08/grub.xml
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ Insert a blank floppy diskette and run the following commands:</para>
dd if=/boot/grub/stage2 of=/dev/fd0 bs=512 seek=1</userinput></screen>
<para>Remove the diskette and store it somewhere safe. Now we'll run the
-<userinput>grub</userinput> shell.</para>
+<userinput>grub</userinput> shell:</para>
<screen><userinput>grub</userinput></screen>
@@ -54,8 +54,8 @@ files -- you can use Tab everywhere to make Grub show the alternatives:</para>
Don't run the command if this is not what you want. For example, you may be
using a third party boot manager to manage your MBR (Master Boot Record). In
this scenario, it would probably make more sense to install Grub into the
-"boot sector" of the LFS partition, in which case the command would become
-<userinput>setup (hd0,3)</userinput>:</para></warning>
+"boot sector" of the LFS partition, in which case the command would become:
+<userinput>setup (hd0,3)</userinput>.</para></warning>
<!-- HACK - Force some whitespace to appease tidy -->
<literallayout></literallayout>
@@ -70,8 +70,8 @@ this scenario, it would probably make more sense to install Grub into the
<screen><userinput>quit</userinput></screen>
-<para>Now we need to create the <filename>menu.lst</filename> file, which
-defines Grub's boot menu:</para>
+<para>Now we need to create a "menu list" file, defining Grub's boot
+menu:</para>
<screen><userinput>cat &gt; /boot/grub/menu.lst &lt;&lt; "EOF"</userinput>
# Begin /boot/grub/menu.lst