Grammatic changes to the preface.

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diff --git a/preface/organization.xml b/preface/organization.xml
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@@ -2,12 +2,11 @@
 <title>Organization</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="organization.html" dir="preface"?>
 
-<para>This book is divided into the following parts. Although most of
-the appendices are copied into part II (which enlarges the book somewhat), 
-we believe it's the easiest way to read it like this. It simply saves
-you from having to click to an Appendix, then back to where you were in
-part II. That's a real chore especially if you're reading the TXT
-version of this book.</para>
+<para>Much of the appendices is integrated into Part II (which enlarges the
+book somewhat). We believe this makes for easier reading. This way, you
+don't have to keep referencing an Appendix while you read Part II. That's
+a real chore, especially if you're reading the TXT version of this book.
+This book is divided into the following parts.</para>
 
 &pf-oz-organpart1;
 &pf-oz-organpart2;