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| author | Marc Heerdink <gimli@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2001-04-28 11:34:25 +0000 |
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| committer | Marc Heerdink <gimli@linuxfromscratch.org> | 2001-04-28 11:34:25 +0000 |
| commit | bc195e53d5e063b146ecf1113c4c6e7918070120 (patch) | |
| tree | 10d174d2d1a69ab0300f8b6b7e349c530d85907e /preface | |
| parent | edc3f315cc50db8ae047800471f2d51bbec4dc0f (diff) | |
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diff --git a/preface/organpart1.xml b/preface/organpart1.xml index 2b6d59b86..3e7b3e99c 100644 --- a/preface/organpart1.xml +++ b/preface/organpart1.xml @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ <para> Part One gives general information about this book (versions, where to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and how to get in touch with us). -It also explains a few important aspects a user really wants and needs to +It also explains a few important aspects you really want and need to read before starting to build an LFS system. </para> diff --git a/preface/whonotread.xml b/preface/whonotread.xml index 6c6d0dcef..80d7d08dc 100644 --- a/preface/whonotread.xml +++ b/preface/whonotread.xml @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ <title>Who would not want to read this book</title> <para> -Users who don't want to build an entire Linux system from scratch +People who don't want to build an entire Linux system from scratch probably don't want to read this book. If you, however, want to learn more about what happens behind the scenes, in particular what happens between turning on the computer and seeing the command prompt, you may diff --git a/preface/whoread.xml b/preface/whoread.xml index 40b8f7496..f352c2ac9 100644 --- a/preface/whoread.xml +++ b/preface/whoread.xml @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ custom built Linux system. Reasons for wanting to build such a system are diverse. Perhaps you want to get into more detail as to what happens behind the scenes. Perhaps you are fed up with distributions which are often bloated or perhaps you don't want to rely on pre-compiled -binaries due to security concerns. There are many reasons why a user may +binaries due to security concerns. There are many reasons why someone may want a custom built system. If you are one of them, this book is meant for you. </para> |