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authorGerard Beekmans <gerard@linuxfromscratch.org>2001-03-23 02:04:06 +0000
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<para>
Users who don't want to build an entire Linux system from scratch
-probably don't want to read this book. If a user, however, wants to learn
+probably don't want to read this book. If you, however, want to learn
more about what happens behind the scenes, in particular what happens
-between turning on the computer and seeing the command prompt, he wants
-to read the <quote>From Power Up To Bash Prompt</quote> (P2B) HOWTO.
+between turning on the computer and seeing the command prompt, you may
+want to read the <quote>From Power Up To Bash Prompt</quote> (P2B) HOWTO.
This HOWTO builds a bare system, in way similar to the one this book
uses, but it focusses more on just installing a bootable system instead
of a complete system.
</para>
<para>
-To decide whether to read this book or the P2B HOWTO, a user could
-ask himself this question: "Is my main objective to get a working Linux
-system that I'm going to build myself and, along the way, learn what
-every component of a system is for, or is just the learning part my main
-objective?" If he wants to build and learn, he reads this book. If he just
-wants to learn, then the P2B HOWTO is probably better material to read.
+To decide whether to read this book or the P2B HOWTO, ask yourself this
+question: "Is my main objective to get a working Linux system that I'm
+going to build myself and, along the way, learn what every component of
+a system is for, or is just the learning part my main objective?" If
+you want to build and learn, read this book. If you just want to learn,
+then the P2B HOWTO is probably better material to read.
</para>
<para>
-The <quote>From Power Up To Bash Prompt</quote> HOWTO can be downloaded
-from <ulink url="http://www.netspace.net.au/~gok/power2bash/">
+The <quote>From Power Up To Bash Prompt</quote> HOWTO is located at
+<ulink url="http://www.netspace.net.au/~gok/power2bash/">
http://www.netspace.net.au/~gok/power2bash/</ulink>
</para>