applied Alex' 'further dividing the book' patch

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2271 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

4 files changed, 43 insertions, 34 deletions

diff --git a/preface/organization.xml b/preface/organization.xml
index 0a41b453f..0241390b1 100644
--- a/preface/organization.xml
+++ b/preface/organization.xml
@@ -2,14 +2,45 @@
 <title>Organization</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="organization.html" dir="preface"?>
 
-<para>Much of the appendices are integrated into Part II (which enlarges the
-book somewhat). We believe this makes for easier reading. This way, you
-don't have to keep referencing an appendix while you read Part II. That's
-a real chore, especially if you're reading the txt version of this book.
-This book is divided into the following parts:</para>
-
-&pf-oz-organpart1;
-&pf-oz-organpart2;
-&pf-oz-organpart3;
+<para>This book is divided into the following four parts:</para>
+
+<sect2>
+<title>Part I - Introduction</title>
+
+<para>Part I explains a few important things on how to proceed with the
+installation, and gives meta information about the book (version, changelog,
+acknowledgments, associated mailing lists, and so on).</para>
+</sect2>
+
+<sect2>
+<title>Part II - Preparing for the build</title>
+
+<para>Part II describes how to prepare for the building process: making a
+partition, downloading the packages, and compiling temporary tools.</para>
+</sect2>
+
+<sect2>
+<title>Part III - Building the LFS system</title>
+
+<para>Part III guides you through the building of the LFS system: compiling
+and installing all the packages one by one, setting up the boot scripts, and
+installing the kernel. The resulting basic Linux system is the foundation
+upon which you can build other software, to extend your system in the way
+you like.</para>
+</sect2>
+
+<sect2>
+<title>Part IV - Appendix</title>
+
+<para>Part IV for the moment consists of just a single appendix: an alphabetical
+list of all the packages installed, for each package giving its official download
+location, its contents, and its installation dependencies.</para>
+
+<para>(Much of this Appendix A is integrated into Parts II and III. This
+enlarges the book somewhat, but we believe it makes for easier reading. Now
+you don't have to keep referencing the appendix while doing the installation.
+This going back and forth would be a real chore, especially if you're reading
+the txt version of the book.)</para>
+</sect2>
 
 </sect1>
diff --git a/preface/organpart1.xml b/preface/organpart1.xml
index d8480cdcd..c3982ed41 100644
--- a/preface/organpart1.xml
+++ b/preface/organpart1.xml
@@ -1,10 +1,2 @@
-<sect2 id="pre-organ1">
-<title>Part I - Introduction</title>
-
-<para>Part I gives general information about the contents of the book
-(revisions, where to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and other contact
-information). It also contains suggested readings which discuss a few
-important considerations before beginning your LFS system.</para>
-
-</sect2>
 
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diff --git a/preface/organpart2.xml b/preface/organpart2.xml
index ee99b3236..c3982ed41 100644
--- a/preface/organpart2.xml
+++ b/preface/organpart2.xml
@@ -1,11 +1,2 @@
-<sect2 id="pre-organ2">
-<title>Part II - Installation of the base LFS system</title>
-
-<para>Part II guides you through the building and installation of an LFS
-system. The resulting LFS system will be the core foundation upon which
-the rest of your Linux system is built. Whatever your system becomes,
-it will be built and supported by the foundation that we build in Part
-II.</para>
-
-</sect2>
 
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diff --git a/preface/organpart3.xml b/preface/organpart3.xml
index ff63d5648..c3982ed41 100644
--- a/preface/organpart3.xml
+++ b/preface/organpart3.xml
@@ -1,7 +1,2 @@
-<sect2 id="pre-organ3">
-<title>Part III - Appendixes</title>
-
-<para>Part III contains various appendices.</para>
-
-</sect2>
 
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