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authorArchaic <archaic@linuxfromscratch.org>2005-06-29 16:24:16 +0000
committerArchaic <archaic@linuxfromscratch.org>2005-06-29 16:24:16 +0000
commit663ecfcc5f04e7c2860b83ef89e49f5e8b68bbbe (patch)
tree7c789513e8b75ee906795c4a06600e2e4284638f /prologue/audience.xml
parent2ec0d203c3af587beb98406888dca6f6f5283180 (diff)
Several minor wording changes (chapters 1 - 5).
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6232 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
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@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
<?dbhtml filename="audience.html"?>
<para>There are many reasons why somebody would want to read this
-book. The principle reason is to install a Linux system straight
+book. The principle reason is to install a Linux system
from the source code. A question many people raise is, <quote>why go
through all the hassle of manually building a Linux system from
scratch when you can just download and install an existing
@@ -32,9 +32,9 @@ and how programs are installed.</para>
<para>Another benefit of LFS is the ability to create a very compact
Linux system. When installing a regular distribution, one is often
forced to include several programs which are probably never used.
-These programs waste precious disk space, or worse, CPU cycles. It is
+These programs waste disk space, or worse, CPU cycles. It is
not difficult to build an LFS system of less than 100 megabytes (MB),
-which is substantially smaller when compared to the majority of existing installations. Does
+which is substantially smaller than the majority of existing installations. Does
this still sound like a lot of space? A few of us have been working on
creating a very small embedded LFS system. We successfully built a
system that was specialized to run the Apache web server with