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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/config-ldso.xml | 7 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/config-shadowpwd.xml | 13 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/config-vim.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/manpages-inst.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/perl-inst.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | preface/organpart3.xml | 2 |
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diff --git a/chapter02/install.xml b/chapter02/install.xml index e5b2e4c3c..d091763f0 100644 --- a/chapter02/install.xml +++ b/chapter02/install.xml @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ If a file is just tar'ed, it is unpacked by running: </literallayout></blockquote> <para> -When ab archive is unpacked, a new directory will be created under the +When an archive is unpacked, a new directory will be created under the current directory (and this book assumes that the archives are unpacked under the $LFS/usr/src directory). Please enter that new directory before continuing with the installation instructions. Again, every time diff --git a/chapter05/installasroot.xml b/chapter05/installasroot.xml index 91b4e3af0..bfb49d62e 100644 --- a/chapter05/installasroot.xml +++ b/chapter05/installasroot.xml @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ feel it's safe to ignore that recommendation and compile as user root anyway. Hundreds of people using LFS have done so without any problems whatsoever, and we haven't encountered any bugs in the compile processes that cause harm. So it's pretty safe (never can be 100% safe though, so -it's up to you what you ends up doing). +it's up to you what you end up doing). </para> </sect1> diff --git a/chapter06/config-glibc.xml b/chapter06/config-glibc.xml index f4965d3a9..b2939e5d6 100644 --- a/chapter06/config-glibc.xml +++ b/chapter06/config-glibc.xml @@ -38,8 +38,8 @@ netgroup: db files <para> The <userinput>tzselect</userinput> script has to be run and the questions -regarding the user's timezone have to be answered. -When the user is done, the script will give the +regarding your timezone have to be answered. +When you're done, the script will give the location of the needed timezone file. </para> @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ tzselect's output can be something like <emphasis>EST5EDT</emphasis> or </para> <para> -The symlink a user would create with that information would be: +The symlink you'd create with that information would be: </para> <blockquote><literallayout> diff --git a/chapter06/config-ldso.xml b/chapter06/config-ldso.xml index d8057fbf8..c6189d044 100644 --- a/chapter06/config-ldso.xml +++ b/chapter06/config-ldso.xml @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ libraries, so there normally isn't a need for the directories in which a user wants the system to search for paths. The <filename class="directory">/usr/local/lib</filename> directory isn't searched through for dynamic libraries by default, so we want to add -this path so when a user installs software he won't be surprised by them not +this path so when you install software you won't be surprised by them not running for some reason. </para> @@ -33,9 +33,8 @@ following: Although it's not necessary to add the <filename class="directory">/lib</filename> and <filename class="directory">/usr/lib</filename> directories it doesn't -hurt. This way it can be seen right away what's being searched and a user -doesn't have -to remember the default search paths if he doesn't want to. +hurt. This way it can be seen right away what's being searched and a you +don't have to remember the default search paths if you don't want to. </para> </sect2> diff --git a/chapter06/config-shadowpwd.xml b/chapter06/config-shadowpwd.xml index 2afaa04d6..6949f08a2 100644 --- a/chapter06/config-shadowpwd.xml +++ b/chapter06/config-shadowpwd.xml @@ -2,10 +2,10 @@ <para> This package contains the utilities to modify user's passwords, add new -users/groups, delete users/groups and more. I'm not going to explain +users/groups, delete users/groups and more. We're not going to explain what 'password shadowing' means. All about that can be read in the doc/HOWTO file within the unpacked shadow password suite's source tree. There's one -thing a user should keep in mind, if he decides to use shadow support, that +thing you should keep in mind, if you decide to use shadow support, that programs that need to verify passwords (examples are xdm, ftp daemons, pop3 daemons, etc) need to be 'shadow-compliant', eg. they need to be able to work with shadow'ed passwords. @@ -18,17 +18,16 @@ shadow password suite does not enable shadow'ed passwords. <para> Now is a very good moment to read chapter 5 of the doc/HOWTO file. It -describes -how to enable shadow'ed passwords, how to test whether shadowing -works and if not, how to disable it again. +describes how to enable shadow'ed passwords, how to test whether +shadowing works and if not, how to disable it again. </para> <para> The documentation mentions something about the creation of npasswd and nshadow after pwconv is run. This is an error in the documentation. Those two files will not be created. After pwconv is run, /etc/passwd -will no longer contain the passwords and /etc/shadow will. A user doesn't -need to rename the npasswd and nshadow files himself. +will no longer contain the passwords and /etc/shadow will. You don't +need to rename the npasswd and nshadow files yourself. </para> </sect2> diff --git a/chapter06/config-vim.xml b/chapter06/config-vim.xml index 8ebe220b8..7e230f1b8 100644 --- a/chapter06/config-vim.xml +++ b/chapter06/config-vim.xml @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ <para> By default Vim runs in vi compatible mode. Some people might like this, -but I have a high preference to run vim in vim mode (else I wouldn't +but we have a high preference to run vim in vim mode (else we wouldn't have included Vim in this book but the original Vi). Create the <filename>/root/.vimrc</filename> by running the following: </para> diff --git a/chapter06/manpages-inst.xml b/chapter06/manpages-inst.xml index 1ad88f7e0..e7fade0d6 100644 --- a/chapter06/manpages-inst.xml +++ b/chapter06/manpages-inst.xml @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ <title>Installation of Man-pages</title> <para> -Install Man-pages by running the following commands: +Install Man-pages by running the following command: </para> <blockquote><literallayout> diff --git a/chapter06/perl-inst.xml b/chapter06/perl-inst.xml index 05c565f7f..fcf1938bd 100644 --- a/chapter06/perl-inst.xml +++ b/chapter06/perl-inst.xml @@ -12,10 +12,10 @@ Install Perl by running the following commands: </literallayout></blockquote> <para> -If a user doesn't want to answer all those questions Perl asks, he can +If you don't want to answer all those questions Perl asks, you can add the -d option to the configure script and Perl will use all the default settings. To avoid the Configure script asking questions -after the config.sh file has been created he can pass the -e parameter +after the config.sh file has been created you can pass the -e parameter to perl as well. The commands with these parameters included will be: </para> diff --git a/preface/organpart3.xml b/preface/organpart3.xml index fcc7cc7e6..8f2bdc63a 100644 --- a/preface/organpart3.xml +++ b/preface/organpart3.xml @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ <title>Part III - Appendixes</title> <para> -Part Three contains various Appendixes. +Part Three contains various Appendices. </para> </sect2> |