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-rw-r--r--chapter03/creatingfs.xml22
-rw-r--r--chapter03/creatingpart.xml15
-rw-r--r--chapter03/introduction.xml7
-rw-r--r--chapter03/mounting.xml11
4 files changed, 27 insertions, 28 deletions
diff --git a/chapter03/creatingfs.xml b/chapter03/creatingfs.xml
index 04263cb5f..30b3c455a 100644
--- a/chapter03/creatingfs.xml
+++ b/chapter03/creatingfs.xml
@@ -3,26 +3,20 @@
<para>
Once the partition is created, we have to create a new file system on
-that partition. To create an ext2 file system, use the mke2fs command.
-To create a reiser file system, the mkreiserfs command should be used.
-The new partition is used as the only option to the command and the file
-system is created. If the partition is hda11 and ext2 is to be created,
-run the following:
+that partition. The standard file system used these days is the ext2
+file system, but the socalled journaling file systems are becoming
+increasingly popular too. It's of course up to you to decide which file
+system you want to create, but because we have to assume and work with
+something, we will assume you chose the ext2 file system.
</para>
-<blockquote><literallayout>
-
- <userinput>mke2fs /dev/xxx</userinput>
-
-</literallayout></blockquote>
-
-<para>
-To create a reiser file system, run the following:
+To create an ext2 file system, use the mke2fs command. The LFS partition
+is used as the only option to the command and the file system is created.
</para>
<blockquote><literallayout>
- <userinput>mkreiserfs /dev/xxx</userinput>
+ <userinput>mke2fs /dev/xxx</userinput>
</literallayout></blockquote>
diff --git a/chapter03/creatingpart.xml b/chapter03/creatingpart.xml
index 9715dfe77..dd267a7ec 100644
--- a/chapter03/creatingpart.xml
+++ b/chapter03/creatingpart.xml
@@ -13,13 +13,20 @@ Linux Native partition is already available, this subsection can be skipped.
</para>
<para>
-The cfdisk program (or another fdisk like program the user prefers) is
+The cfdisk program (or another fdisk like program you prefer)) is
started with the appropriate hard disk as the option (like /dev/hda if a
new partition is to be created on the primary master IDE disk). It is used
to create a Linux Native partition, write the partition table and exit the
-cfdisk program. The new partition's designation should be remembered. It
-could be something like hda11 (as it is in my case). This newly created
-partition will be referred to as the LFS partition in this book.
+cfdisk program. Please refer to the documentation that comes with your
+fdisk program of choice (the man pages are often a good place to start)
+and read the procedures about how to create a new Linux native
+partition and how to write the partition table.
+</para>
+
+<para>
+The new partition's designation should be remembered. It
+could be something like hda11. This newly created partition will be
+referred to as the LFS partition in this book.
</para>
</sect1>
diff --git a/chapter03/introduction.xml b/chapter03/introduction.xml
index 79f9aee70..92b7d6d17 100644
--- a/chapter03/introduction.xml
+++ b/chapter03/introduction.xml
@@ -3,10 +3,9 @@
<para>
In this chapter, the partition that is going to host the LFS system is
-going to be prepared. A new partition will be created, a file
-system will be created on it, and the directory structure will be
-created. When this is done, we can move on to the next chapter and start
-building a new Linux system from scratch.
+going to be prepared. We will be creating the partition itself, a file
+system and the directory structure. When this is done, we can move on
+to the next chapter and start the actual building process.
</para>
</sect1>
diff --git a/chapter03/mounting.xml b/chapter03/mounting.xml
index 3ef84a20d..3238508df 100644
--- a/chapter03/mounting.xml
+++ b/chapter03/mounting.xml
@@ -3,12 +3,11 @@
<para>
Now that we have created a file system, it is ready for use. All we have
-to do to be able to access it (as in reading data from and writing data to
-it) is mount it. If it is mounted under /mnt/lfs, this partition can
-be accessed by going to the /mnt/lfs directory and then doing whatever
-needed to do. This book will assume that the partition was mounted
-under /mnt/lfs. It doesn't matter which directory is chosen, the
-user just has to make sure that he remembers what he chose.
+to do to be able to access the partition (as in reading data from and writing
+data to) is mount it. If it is mounted under /mnt/lfs, this partition can
+be accessed by cd'ing to the /mnt/lfs directory. This book will assume
+that the partition was mounted under /mnt/lfs. It doesn't matter which
+directory is chosen, just make sure you remember what you chose.
</para>
<para>