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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/how.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/othermodes.xml | 2 | ||||
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| -rw-r--r-- | preface/organpart2.xml | 2 |
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diff --git a/chapter01/how.xml b/chapter01/how.xml index 3ecbe4c3f..8bd2af2c5 100644 --- a/chapter01/how.xml +++ b/chapter01/how.xml @@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ system as the base (since we need a compiler, linker, text editor, and other tools).</para> <para>After you have downloaded the necessary packages that make up an LFS -system you will create a new Linux native partition where the LFS system -will be installed onto.</para> +system you will create a new Linux native partition onto which the LFS system +will be installed.</para> <para>The next step, chapter 5, will be the installation of a number of packages that are statically linked and installed on the LFS partition. diff --git a/chapter01/othermodes.xml b/chapter01/othermodes.xml index f3af33431..41e2b4c77 100644 --- a/chapter01/othermodes.xml +++ b/chapter01/othermodes.xml @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ the messages posted to the list during that day.</para> <para>There is a second digest mode called digest2. When a user is set to this mode he will receive the daily digests but will also continue to receive the individual messages to the lists as they are posted. To -set this mode, substiture <emphasis>digest</emphasis> for +set this mode, substitute <emphasis>digest</emphasis> for <emphasis>digest2</emphasis> in the command.</para> </sect2> diff --git a/chapter05/introduction.xml b/chapter05/introduction.xml index e861f3cbb..d7f99830c 100644 --- a/chapter05/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter05/introduction.xml @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ example of such a dependency is that you need a compiler to install a compiler, and you're going to need a shell to install a shell and that compiler.</para> -<para>The key to learn what makes Linux tick is to know exactly what packages +<para>The key to learning what makes Linux tick is to know exactly what packages are used for and why a user or the system needs them. Descriptions of the package content are provided after the Installation subsection of each package and in Appendix A as well.</para> diff --git a/preface/organpart2.xml b/preface/organpart2.xml index 71fd90ab6..2e647a314 100644 --- a/preface/organpart2.xml +++ b/preface/organpart2.xml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <sect2 id="pre-organ2"> <title>Part II - Installation of the LFS system</title> -<para>Part Two guides through the installation of the LFS system which will +<para>Part Two guides you through the installation of the LFS system which will be the foundation for the rest of the system. Whatever you choose to do with your brand new LFS system, it will be built on the foundation that's installed in this part.</para> |