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| -rw-r--r-- | appendixa/bootscripts-desc.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/changelog.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/how.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter02/download.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter05/installasuser.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter05/introduction.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/config-keyboard.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter07/introduction.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter07/loadkeys.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter07/network.xml | 2 |
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diff --git a/appendixa/bootscripts-desc.xml b/appendixa/bootscripts-desc.xml index ad59f060e..be66bd350 100644 --- a/appendixa/bootscripts-desc.xml +++ b/appendixa/bootscripts-desc.xml @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ device.</para></sect4> or aren't network based.</para></sect4> <sect4><title>network</title> -<para>The network script setup network interfaces (such as network cards) +<para>The network script sets up network interfaces (such as network cards) and sets up the default gateway where applicable.</para></sect4> <sect4><title>rc</title> diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml index 7d10e2a26..355a90926 100644 --- a/chapter01/changelog.xml +++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml @@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ binutils-2.12</para></listitem> here hinted towards the fact that you could skip configuring this step which isn't true unless the entire script would be removed. So the text was changed a bit to just have them create the file no matter how the hardware -clock is setup.</para></listitem> +clock is set up.</para></listitem> <listitem><para>March 11th, 2002 [gerard]: Chapter 07 - Loadkeys: Removed the need to configure a <filename>/etc/sysconfig/keyboard</filename> file. @@ -497,7 +497,7 @@ files (dependencies, download location, descriptions)</para></listitem> installation.</para></listitem> <listitem><para>January 15th, 2002 [gerard]: Chapter 7: Removed most of the -scripts, only left the part of a few where we setup up config files in +scripts, only left the part of a few where we set up config files in /etc/sysconfig.</para></listitem> <listitem><para>January 15th, 2002 [gerard]: Chapter 6 - Configuring diff --git a/chapter01/how.xml b/chapter01/how.xml index 8c0f2b4ab..75e1702f3 100644 --- a/chapter01/how.xml +++ b/chapter01/how.xml @@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ still use your host system. While software is being installed you can simply switch to a different VC (Virtual Console) or X desktop and continue using your computer as you normally would.</para> -<para>When all the software is installed, chapter 7 will setup the boot -scripts. Chapter 8 will setup the Linux boot loader and in chapter 9 +<para>When all the software is installed, chapter 7 will set up the boot +scripts. Chapter 8 will set up the Linux boot loader and in chapter 9 there are some pointers what you can do after you finish the book. Then you can finally reboot your system into your new LFS system, and start to really use it.</para> diff --git a/chapter02/download.xml b/chapter02/download.xml index b6ffa3edb..6195992ec 100644 --- a/chapter02/download.xml +++ b/chapter02/download.xml @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ makes sense because you would still have access to those files when you boot into the LFS system. $LFS/usr/src is just a logical place to store source code, but by no means a requirement. You may even want to create a subdirectory under $LFS/usr/src for tarball storage. That way you can -seperate tarballs from temporary build directories, but again that's up +separate tarballs from temporary build directories, but again that's up to you.</para> <para>The next chapter contains a list of all the packages that need to be diff --git a/chapter05/installasuser.xml b/chapter05/installasuser.xml index 21d455ec1..4544e735a 100644 --- a/chapter05/installasuser.xml +++ b/chapter05/installasuser.xml @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ as root to change the ownership of the LFS partition to user "lfs":</para> <para>Now you can login as user "lfs". You can do this two ways: either the normal way through the console or the display manager, or with <userinput>su - lfs</userinput>. When you're working as user "lfs", type -the following commands to setup a good environment to work in:</para> +the following commands to set up a good environment to work in:</para> <para><screen><userinput>cat > ~/.bash_profile << "EOF" umask 022 diff --git a/chapter05/introduction.xml b/chapter05/introduction.xml index 146be15bf..62707dde6 100644 --- a/chapter05/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter05/introduction.xml @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ about improper use of the C or C++ syntax, but not illegal use. It's just that, often, C standards changed and packages still use the old standard which is not a problem).</para> -<para>Before we start, make sure the LFS environment variable is setup +<para>Before we start, make sure the LFS environment variable is set up properly if you decided to make use of it. Run the following:</para> <para><screen><userinput>echo $LFS</userinput></screen></para> diff --git a/chapter06/config-keyboard.xml b/chapter06/config-keyboard.xml index 32b9a285f..014007ae4 100644 --- a/chapter06/config-keyboard.xml +++ b/chapter06/config-keyboard.xml @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ example, if you have a Dutch keyboard, you would run:</para> <para><screen><userinput>ln -s i386/qwerty/nl.map.gz /usr/share/kbd/keymaps/defkeymap.map.gz</userinput></screen></para> -<para>An second option to configure your keyboard's layout is to compile +<para>A second option to configure your keyboard's layout is to compile the keymap directly into the kernel. This will make sure that your keyboard always works as expected, even when you have booted into maintenance mode (by passing `init=/bin/sh' to the kernel) in which case diff --git a/chapter07/introduction.xml b/chapter07/introduction.xml index 16297cfab..5ff7eecea 100644 --- a/chapter07/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter07/introduction.xml @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ <title>Introduction</title> <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html" dir="chapter07"?> -<para>This chapter will setup the bootscripts that you installed in chapter +<para>This chapter will set up the bootscripts that you installed in chapter 6. Most of these scripts will work without needing to modify them, but a -few do require additional configuration files setup as they deal with +few do require additional configuration files set up as they deal with hardware dependent information.</para> </sect1> diff --git a/chapter07/loadkeys.xml b/chapter07/loadkeys.xml index a851aa3b0..fce9720c4 100644 --- a/chapter07/loadkeys.xml +++ b/chapter07/loadkeys.xml @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ <para>If you decided to compile your keymap file directly into the kernel back at the end of chapter 6, then you strictly speaking don't need to run -this loadkeys script, since the kernel has already setup the keymap for +this loadkeys script, since the kernel has already set up the keymap for you. You can still run it if you want, it isn't going to hurt you. It could even be beneficial to keep it in case you run a lot of different kernels and don't remember or want to compile the keymap into every kernel you lay diff --git a/chapter07/network.xml b/chapter07/network.xml index 7c028e247..aad5280be 100644 --- a/chapter07/network.xml +++ b/chapter07/network.xml @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ runlevel directories <sect2> <title>Configuring default gateway</title> -<para>If you're on a network you may need to setup the default gateway for +<para>If you're on a network you may need to set up the default gateway for this machine. This is done by adding the proper values to the /etc/sysconfig/network file by running the following:</para> |