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diff --git a/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml b/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml index 5c1079671..50ae95043 100644 --- a/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml +++ b/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml @@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ Lenglet</ulink> <johan@linuxfromscratch.org> -- French LFS translation project.</para></listitem> <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:lizardo@linuxfromscratch.org">Anderson -Lizardo</ulink> <lizardo@linuxfromscratch.org> -- Portugese LFS +Lizardo</ulink> <lizardo@linuxfromscratch.org> -- Portuguese LFS translation project.</para></listitem> </itemizedlist> @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ translation project.</para></listitem> </sect2> <sect2> -<title>Mirrors</title> +<title>Mirror Maintainers</title> <itemizedlist> @@ -191,9 +191,9 @@ mirror.</para></listitem> url="mailto:ian@ichilton.co.uk">Ian Chilton</ulink> for running it.</para></listitem> -<listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:highos@linuxfromscratch.org">Jesse Tie-Ten- -Quee</ulink> <highos@linuxfromscratch.org> for providing and running the -linuxfromscratch.org server.</para></listitem> +<listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:highos@linuxfromscratch.org">Jesse +Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> <highos@linuxfromscratch.org> for providing and +running the linuxfromscratch.org server.</para></listitem> <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:velin@zadnik.org">Alexander Velin</ulink> <velin@zadnik.org> -- bg.linuxfromscratch.org mirror.</para></listitem> @@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ mirror.</para></listitem> </sect2> <sect2> -<title>Donations</title> +<title>Donators</title> <itemizedlist> @@ -223,7 +223,7 @@ their past sponsorship of donating various resources to the LFS and related sub projects.</para></listitem> <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:hrx@hrxnet.de">Hagen Herrschaft</ulink> -<hrx@hrxnet.de> for donating a P4 2.2Ghz system.</para></listitem> +<hrx@hrxnet.de> for donating a P4 2.2 GHz system.</para></listitem> <listitem><para><ulink url="http://www.oreilly.com">O'Reilly</ulink> for donating books on SQL and PHP.</para></listitem> @@ -233,11 +233,11 @@ who, on behalf of <ulink url="http://www.linux.com">Linux.com</ulink>, donated a VA Linux 420 (former StartX SP2) workstation.</para></listitem> <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:strider@linux.com">Mark Stone</ulink> for -donating shadowfax the linuxfromscratch.org server.</para></listitem> +donating shadowfax, the linuxfromscratch.org server.</para></listitem> -<listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:highos@linuxfromscratch.org">Jesse Tie-Ten- -Quee</ulink> <highos@linuxfromscratch.org> for donating a Yamaha CDRW -8824E cd writer.</para></listitem> +<listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:highos@linuxfromscratch.org">Jesse +Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> <highos@linuxfromscratch.org> for donating a Yamaha +CDRW 8824E cd writer.</para></listitem> <listitem><para>Countless other people on the various LFS mailinglists who are making this book happen by giving their suggestions, testing the book and @@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ submitting bug reports.</para></listitem> </sect2> <sect2> -<title>Previous Team Members and Contributors</title> +<title>Former Team Members and Contributors</title> <itemizedlist> @@ -286,9 +286,9 @@ original LFS banner by Garrett LeSage.</para></listitem> <bkenoah@oswd.org> -- Initial design of the old website - <ulink url="http://www.oswd.org">OSWD</ulink>.</para></listitem> -<listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:highos@linuxfromscratch.org">Jesse Tie-Ten- -Quee</ulink> <highos@linuxfromscratch.org> for answering countless -questions on irc and having a great deal of patience.</para></listitem> +<listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:highos@linuxfromscratch.org">Jesse +Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> <highos@linuxfromscratch.org> for answering +countless questions on IRC and having a great deal of patience.</para></listitem> </itemizedlist> diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml index 92386c18b..12136f77c 100644 --- a/chapter01/changelog.xml +++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml @@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ page to match the website.</para></listitem> <listitem><para>September 17th, 2003 [jeremy]: Upgraded File to 4.04</para></listitem> <listitem><para>September 17th, 2003 [jeremy]: Chapter 6 - changed 2 of the -occurances of exec bash --login to include the +h directive. </para></listitem> +occurrences of exec bash --login to include the +h directive. </para></listitem> <listitem><para>September 17th, 2003 [greg]: Chapters 5 and 6 - Locking in Glibc and Re-adjusting the toolchain: Do "make -C ld install" instead of "make diff --git a/chapter01/how.xml b/chapter01/how.xml index a569b6388..83c2440c5 100644 --- a/chapter01/how.xml +++ b/chapter01/how.xml @@ -49,12 +49,12 @@ the binary programs you just compiled. This has the potential to cause problems for you down the road. The host's Glibc is usually an unknown quantity and might even contain bugs or anything else we don't know about until it is too late. A well known issue is that statically linked binaries -compiled on a Glibc-2.2.x based system that contain calls to the <emphasis> -getpwuid()</emphasis> function crash when run on a Glibc-2.3.x based system. -Seeing as we are about to build a Glibc-2.3.x based system, we need to shield -ourselves from problems of this nature. The procedure employed in Chapter 5 -achieves this goal. With all these things in mind, you can see that the extra -effort to compile Binutils and GCC twice is well worth it.</para> +compiled on a Glibc-2.2.x based system that contain calls to the +<emphasis>getpwuid()</emphasis> function crash when run on a Glibc-2.3.x based +system. Seeing as we are about to build a Glibc-2.3.x based system, we need to +shield ourselves from problems of this nature. The procedure employed in +Chapter 5 achieves this goal. With all these things in mind, you can see that +the extra effort to compile Binutils and GCC twice is well worth it.</para> <para>In Chapter 6 your real LFS system will be built. The chroot (change root) program is used to enter a virtual environment and start a new shell whose root diff --git a/chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml b/chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml index 46be432b0..1c328c2e1 100644 --- a/chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml +++ b/chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml @@ -55,8 +55,9 @@ out where the problem is and correct it. There is no point in continuing until this is done. Most likely something went wrong with the specs file amendment above. Note especially that <filename>/lib</filename> now appears as the prefix of our dynamic linker. Of course, if you are working on a platform -where the name of the dynamic linker is something other than <filename> -ld-linux.so.2</filename>, then the output will be slightly different.</para> +where the name of the dynamic linker is something other than +<filename>ld-linux.so.2</filename>, then the output will be slightly +different.</para> <para>Once you are satisfied that all is well, clean up the test files:</para> |