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-rw-r--r-- | chapter03/introduction.xml | 4 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | chapter03/mounting.xml | 4 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | chapter05/bash-exp.xml | 6 |
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diff --git a/chapter03/introduction.xml b/chapter03/introduction.xml index 077e7f5ed..79f9aee70 100644 --- a/chapter03/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter03/introduction.xml @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ <title>Introduction</title> <para> -In this chapter the partition that is going to host the LFS system is +In this chapter, the partition that is going to host the LFS system is going to be prepared. A new partition will be created, a file -system will be created on it and the directory structure will be +system will be created on it, and the directory structure will be created. When this is done, we can move on to the next chapter and start building a new Linux system from scratch. </para> diff --git a/chapter03/mounting.xml b/chapter03/mounting.xml index 786945bcb..0477bf141 100644 --- a/chapter03/mounting.xml +++ b/chapter03/mounting.xml @@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ <para> Now that we have created a file system, it is ready for use. All we have to do to be able to access it (as in reading data from and writing data to -it) is mounting it. If it is mounted under /mnt/lfs, this partition can -be accessed by going to the /mnt/lfs directory and then doing whatever +it) is mount it. If it is mounted under /mnt/lfs, this partition can +be accessed by going to the /mnt/lfs directory and then doing whatever needed to do. This book will assume that the partition was mounted under /mnt/lfs. It doesn't matter which directory is chosen, the user just has to make sure that he remembers what he chose. diff --git a/chapter05/bash-exp.xml b/chapter05/bash-exp.xml index ce6069d86..367d139da 100644 --- a/chapter05/bash-exp.xml +++ b/chapter05/bash-exp.xml @@ -44,11 +44,11 @@ possible) as the original Bourne shell. <para> The <userinput>&&</userinput>'s at the end of every line cause -the next command only to be executed when the previous command exists +the next command to be executed only if the previous command exists with a return value of 0 indicating success. In case all of these commands are copy&pasted -on the shell is is important to be ensured that if -./configure fails, make isn't being executed and likewise if make fails +on the shell, is is important to be ensured that if +./configure fails, make isn't being executed and, likewise, if make fails, that make install isn't being executed, and so forth. </para> |