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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/changelog.xml | 8 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter05/coreutils.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter05/expect.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter05/tcl.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/bzip2.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/gcc-2953.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/grub.xml | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/gzip.xml | 7 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/kbd.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter06/texinfo.xml | 2 |
12 files changed, 21 insertions, 20 deletions
diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml index 60effcc45..85a9fc092 100644 --- a/chapter01/changelog.xml +++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml @@ -463,7 +463,7 @@ flags</para></listitem> <listitem><para>August 31, 2003 [jeremy] - Added in Greg's new instructions for GCC 3.3.1 with respect to the fixincludes process. Also added extra -verbiage to the locking-in and GCC pass 2 pages on the fixincludes +verbiage to the Locking in Glibc and GCC Pass 2 pages on the fixincludes process.</para></listitem> <listitem><para>August 31st, 2003 [alex]: Reworded some paragraphs, added @@ -565,7 +565,7 @@ core, g++, and test suite tarballs for GCC.</para></listitem> <listitem><para>August 11th, 2003 [alex]: Chapter 04 - Suppressed the mention of a wget script.</para></listitem> -<listitem><para>August 9th, 2003 [alex]: Chapter 05 - Binutils Pass2 and GCC +<listitem><para>August 9th, 2003 [alex]: Chapter 05 - Binutils Pass 2 and GCC Pass 2: integrated some text from the pure-lfs hint.</para></listitem> <listitem><para>August 8th, 2003 [alex]: Chapter 05 - Tcl, Expect, and DejaGnu: @@ -579,11 +579,11 @@ libraries plus references to the installation pages.</para></listitem> the global <filename>vimrc</filename> and <filename>gvimrc</filename> locations are defined.</para></listitem> -<listitem><para>July 30th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 05 - Binutils Pass2: +<listitem><para>July 30th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 05 - Binutils Pass 2: removed the lib patch, it's no longer needed with the binutils-2.14 upgrade.</para></listitem> -<listitem><para>July 30th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 05 Binutils Pass1: Added +<listitem><para>July 30th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 05 Binutils Pass 1: Added <userinput>make configure-host</userinput>.</para></listitem> <listitem><para>July 30th, 2003 [gerard]: Upgraded to binutils-2.14, diff --git a/chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml b/chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml index 6c7e62d98..2e2e46ba2 100644 --- a/chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml +++ b/chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ when linking statically.</para></listitem> <screen><userinput>make configure-host make LDFLAGS="-all-static"</userinput></screen> -<para>The meaning of the make options:</para> +<para>The meaning of the make parameters:</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem><para><userinput>configure-host</userinput>: This forces all the @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ strictly speaking, <userinput>"-all-static"</userinput> is first passed to the <screen><userinput>make -C ld clean make -C ld LDFLAGS="-all-static" LIB_PATH=/tools/lib</userinput></screen> -<para>The meaning of the make options:</para> +<para>The meaning of the make parameters:</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem><para><userinput>-C ld clean</userinput>: This tells the make program diff --git a/chapter05/coreutils.xml b/chapter05/coreutils.xml index 09a010c19..f0a1eb7fb 100644 --- a/chapter05/coreutils.xml +++ b/chapter05/coreutils.xml @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ following command will do so:</para> <screen><userinput>make RUN_EXPENSIVE_TESTS=yes check</userinput></screen> -<para>The meaning of the make option:</para> +<para>The meaning of the make parameter:</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem><para><userinput>RUN_EXPENSIVE_TESTS=yes</userinput>: This tells the diff --git a/chapter05/expect.xml b/chapter05/expect.xml index 8c7acc7f8..f2505d1ae 100644 --- a/chapter05/expect.xml +++ b/chapter05/expect.xml @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ suite, the following command will do so:</para> <screen><userinput>make SCRIPTS="" install</userinput></screen> -<para>The meaning of the make option:</para> +<para>The meaning of the make parameter:</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem><para><userinput>SCRIPTS=""</userinput>: This prevents installation of diff --git a/chapter05/tcl.xml b/chapter05/tcl.xml index 7f0972857..364be9ce9 100644 --- a/chapter05/tcl.xml +++ b/chapter05/tcl.xml @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ following command will do so:</para> <screen><userinput>TZ=UTC make test</userinput></screen> -<para>The meaning of the make option:</para> +<para>The meaning of the make parameter:</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem><para><userinput>TZ=UTC</userinput>: This sets the time zone to diff --git a/chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml b/chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml index 4c587ae68..a5606ad54 100644 --- a/chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml +++ b/chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ <para>Now that the new C libraries have been installed, it's time to re-adjust our toolchain. We'll adjust it so that it will link any newly compiled program against the new C libraries. Basically, this is the reverse of what we did -in the "Locking in" stage in the beginning of the previous chapter.</para> +in the "locking in" stage in the beginning of the previous chapter.</para> <para>The first thing to do is to adjust the linker. For this we retained the source and build directories from the second pass over Binutils. Install the diff --git a/chapter06/bzip2.xml b/chapter06/bzip2.xml index bc032f049..6b1c4f695 100644 --- a/chapter06/bzip2.xml +++ b/chapter06/bzip2.xml @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ make clean</userinput></screen> <para>The <emphasis>-f</emphasis> flag will cause Bzip2 to be built using a different <filename>Makefile</filename> file, in this case the <filename>Makefile-libbz2_so</filename> file, which creates a dynamic -<filename>libbz2.so</filename> library and links the bzip2 utilities +<filename>libbz2.so</filename> library and links the Bzip2 utilities against it.</para> <para>Compile the package:</para> @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ against it.</para> <para>And install the shared <userinput>bzip2</userinput> binary into the <filename class="directory">/bin</filename> directory, then make some -necessary symbolic links, and clean up.</para> +necessary symbolic links, and clean up:</para> <screen><userinput>cp bzip2-shared /bin/bzip2 cp -a libbz2.so* /lib diff --git a/chapter06/gcc-2953.xml b/chapter06/gcc-2953.xml index f0f196ada..5071ad4ce 100644 --- a/chapter06/gcc-2953.xml +++ b/chapter06/gcc-2953.xml @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ directory in a dedicated build directory:</para> <screen><userinput>mkdir ../gcc-2-build cd ../gcc-2-build</userinput></screen> -<para>Compile and install gcc:</para> +<para>Compile and install the compiler:</para> <screen><userinput>../gcc-2.95.3/configure --prefix=/opt/gcc-2.95.3 \ --enable-shared --enable-languages=c \ diff --git a/chapter06/grub.xml b/chapter06/grub.xml index 431715f8d..929e2310b 100644 --- a/chapter06/grub.xml +++ b/chapter06/grub.xml @@ -19,11 +19,11 @@ have defined any environment variables that override default optimizations, such as CFLAGS and CXXFLAGS, we recommend unsetting them when building Grub.</para> -<para>Grub needs a patch to fix a compilation problem with GCC-&gcc-version;</para> +<para>First fix a compilation problem with GCC-&gcc-version;:</para> <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&grub-patch;</userinput></screen> -<para>Prepare Grub for compilation:</para> +<para>Now prepare Grub for compilation:</para> <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr</userinput></screen> diff --git a/chapter06/gzip.xml b/chapter06/gzip.xml index c5a65e9b0..a0ef7800b 100644 --- a/chapter06/gzip.xml +++ b/chapter06/gzip.xml @@ -17,9 +17,10 @@ Estimated required disk space: &gzip-compsize;</screen> <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr</userinput></screen> -<para>The gzexe program has the location of the gzip binary hard-wired into -it. Because we later change the location of this binary, the following -command will place the new location into the gzexe binary.</para> +<para>The <userinput>gzexe</userinput> program has the location of the +<userinput>gzip</userinput> binary hard-wired into it. Because we later change +the location of this latter binary, the following command assures that the new +location gets placed into the binary:</para> <screen><userinput>cp gzexe.in{,.backup} sed 's%"BINDIR"%/bin%' gzexe.in.backup > gzexe.in</userinput></screen> diff --git a/chapter06/kbd.xml b/chapter06/kbd.xml index 33eb1d71c..14b20f15a 100644 --- a/chapter06/kbd.xml +++ b/chapter06/kbd.xml @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ Estimated required disk space: &kbd-compsize;</screen> <para>By default some of Kbd's utilities (<userinput>setlogcons</userinput>, <userinput>setvesablank</userinput> and <userinput>getunimap</userinput>) are -not installed . The patch enables the compilation of these utilities:</para> +not installed. First enable the compilation of these utilities:</para> <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&kbd-patch;</userinput></screen> diff --git a/chapter06/texinfo.xml b/chapter06/texinfo.xml index a00d157eb..a3d5cadd2 100644 --- a/chapter06/texinfo.xml +++ b/chapter06/texinfo.xml @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ following command will do so:</para> <screen><userinput>make TEXMF=/usr/share/texmf install-tex</userinput></screen> -<para>The meaning of the make option:</para> +<para>The meaning of the make parameter:</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem><para><userinput>TEXMF=/usr/share/texmf</userinput>: The TEXMF |