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diff --git a/preface/organization.xml b/preface/organization.xml index 05f0cdbc2..bba292061 100644 --- a/preface/organization.xml +++ b/preface/organization.xml @@ -3,8 +3,8 @@ <para> This book is divided into the following parts. Although there is a lot -of duplicate information in certain parts, it's the easiest way to read it -and, not to mention, the easiest way for me to maintain the book. +of duplicate information in certain parts, it's the easiest way to read +it. </para> &pf-oz-organpart1; diff --git a/preface/organpart1.xml b/preface/organpart1.xml index 3b49ba36c..2b6d59b86 100644 --- a/preface/organpart1.xml +++ b/preface/organpart1.xml @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ <para> Part One gives general information about this book (versions, where -to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and how to get in touch with me). +to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and how to get in touch with us). It also explains a few important aspects a user really wants and needs to read before starting to build an LFS system. </para> diff --git a/preface/organpart2.xml b/preface/organpart2.xml index 5b0603210..1badbfc76 100644 --- a/preface/organpart2.xml +++ b/preface/organpart2.xml @@ -3,9 +3,9 @@ <para> Part Two guides through the installation of the LFS system which will -be the foundation for the rest of the system. Whatever a user -chooses to do with his brand new LFS system, it will be built on the -foundation that's installed in this part. +be the foundation for the rest of the system. Whatever you choose to do +with his brand new LFS system, it will be built on the foundation +that's installed in this part. </para> </sect2> |