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diff --git a/chapter07/introduction.xml b/chapter07/introduction.xml index efbf1d697..e9878ac54 100644 --- a/chapter07/introduction.xml +++ b/chapter07/introduction.xml @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ This chapter will setup basic networking. Although the system might not be connected to a network, Linux software uses network functions anyway. We'll be installing at least the local loopback device and a network -card as well if applicable. Also the proper bootscripts will be created +card as well if applicable. Also the proper boot scripts will be created so that networking will be enabled during boot time. </para> diff --git a/chapter07/localnet.xml b/chapter07/localnet.xml index fbc1f1fd3..26bf21919 100644 --- a/chapter07/localnet.xml +++ b/chapter07/localnet.xml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ <sect1 id="ch09-localnet"> -<title>Creating the /etc/init.d/localnet bootscript</title> +<title>Creating the /etc/init.d/localnet boot script</title> <para> A new file <filename>/etc/init.d/localnet</filename> is created containing diff --git a/preface/whonotread.xml b/preface/whonotread.xml index 6f83c6a24..61cbb9c7a 100644 --- a/preface/whonotread.xml +++ b/preface/whonotread.xml @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ more about what happens behind the scenes, in particular what happens between turning on the computer and seeing the command prompt, you may want to read the <quote>From Power Up To Bash Prompt</quote> (P2B) HOWTO. This HOWTO builds a bare system, in way similar to the one this book -uses, but it focusses more on just installing a bootable system instead +uses, but it focuses more on just installing a bootable system instead of a complete system. </para> diff --git a/preface/whoread.xml b/preface/whoread.xml index 000749a67..40b8f7496 100644 --- a/preface/whoread.xml +++ b/preface/whoread.xml @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ for you. </para> <para> -The fruits of building your own system are plentiful, but the labour may +The fruits of building your own system are plentiful, but the labor may be hard. There is a long way ahead, but in the end you will be able to call yourself the proud owner of your own Linux system, completely tailored after your needs. You will dictate the layout of |