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-rw-r--r--chapter01/changelog.xml5
-rw-r--r--chapter06/perl.xml5
-rw-r--r--chapter06/zlib.xml9
3 files changed, 11 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml
index 852fb0b4b..bff870e61 100644
--- a/chapter01/changelog.xml
+++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml
@@ -39,7 +39,8 @@
environment: Reworked the Bash startup files to enforce a clean environment.
Closes Bug 714.</para></listitem>
-<listitem><para>November 17th, 2003 [jeremy]: Upgraded Man-Pages to 1.63</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>November 17th, 2003 [jeremy]: Upgraded Man-pages to
+1.63.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>November 16th, 2003 [greg]: Chapter 6 - Sysvinit: Simplified
the sed to demonstrate yet another sed variation.</para></listitem>
@@ -79,7 +80,7 @@ streamlined build commands for Perl's Chapter 5 static
extensions. Closes Bug 690.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>November 13th, 2003 [gerard]: Upgraded to
-lfs-utils-0.4 and man-pages-1.62</para></listitem>
+Lfs-Utils-0.4 and Man-pages-1.62</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>November 13th, 2003 [gerard]: Renamed GCC
no_fixincludes-2.patch to no_fixincludes-1.patch which was the name it is
diff --git a/chapter06/perl.xml b/chapter06/perl.xml
index f27c7decf..7010e5f70 100644
--- a/chapter06/perl.xml
+++ b/chapter06/perl.xml
@@ -23,11 +23,12 @@ instead and modify the way Perl is built. If you think you can live with the
(sensible) defaults Perl auto-detects, then just use the command listed
above.</para>
-<para>The meaning of the configure directive:</para>
+<para>The meaning of the configure option:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem><para><userinput>-Dpager="/bin/less -isR"</userinput>: This corrects
-an error in the perldoc code with the invocation of the less program</para></listitem>
+an error in the perldoc code with the invocation of the less
+program.</para></listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<para>Compile the package:</para>
diff --git a/chapter06/zlib.xml b/chapter06/zlib.xml
index fba00043f..354994793 100644
--- a/chapter06/zlib.xml
+++ b/chapter06/zlib.xml
@@ -23,10 +23,11 @@ advantage of, should be taken care of by applying this patch:</para>
<screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --shared</userinput></screen>
-<para>Note: Zlib is known to build its shared library incorrectly if a CFLAGS
-is specified in the environment. If you are using your own CFLAGS variables,
-ensure you add the <emphasis role="strong">-fPIC</emphasis> directive during
-this stage, and remove it afterwards.</para>
+<note><para>Zlib is known to build its shared library incorrectly if CFLAGS is
+specified in the environment. If you are using your own CFLAGS variable, be
+sure to add the <emphasis role="strong">-fPIC</emphasis> directive to your
+CFLAGS for the duration of the above command, then remove it
+afterwards.</para></note>
<para>Compile the package:</para>