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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/changelog.xml | 3 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter07/bootscripts.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter07/hosts.xml | 8 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter07/udev.xml | 2 |
4 files changed, 9 insertions, 6 deletions
diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml index 316f896ea..4a115437a 100644 --- a/chapter01/changelog.xml +++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml @@ -88,6 +88,9 @@ First a summary, then a detailed log.</para> </itemizedlist> </listitem> +<listitem><para>June 16th, 2005 [matthew]: Another round of typo and markup +fixes in chapter 7, as reported by Randy McMurchy.</para></listitem> + <listitem><para>June 16th, 2005 [matthew]: Typo and markup fixes in chapter 7, as reported by Randy McMurchy.</para></listitem> diff --git a/chapter07/bootscripts.xml b/chapter07/bootscripts.xml index 995673409..186e29730 100644 --- a/chapter07/bootscripts.xml +++ b/chapter07/bootscripts.xml @@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ daemons</para> <varlistentry id="udev-bootscripts"> <term><command>udev</command></term> <listitem> -<para>Sets up udev and create the devices nodes in <filename +<para>Sets up udev and create the device nodes in <filename class="directory">/dev</filename></para> <indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts udev-bootscripts"><primary sortas="d-udev">udev</primary></indexterm> </listitem> diff --git a/chapter07/hosts.xml b/chapter07/hosts.xml index b2a77c0c0..30644cd34 100644 --- a/chapter07/hosts.xml +++ b/chapter07/hosts.xml @@ -17,13 +17,13 @@ <primary sortas="d-network">network</primary> <secondary>/etc/hosts</secondary></indexterm> -<para>If a network card is to be configured, decide on the IP-address, +<para>If a network card is to be configured, decide on the IP address, FQDN, and possible aliases for use in the <filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file. The syntax is:</para> <screen><IP address> myhost.example.org aliases</screen> -<para>Unless the computer is to be visible to the Internet (e.g., +<para>Unless the computer is to be visible to the Internet (i.e., there is a registered domain and a valid block of assigned IP addresses—most users do not have this), make sure that the IP address is in the private network IP address range. Valid ranges @@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ are:</para> <screen> Class Networks A 10.0.0.0 - B 172.16.0.0 through 172.31.0.0 - C 192.168.0.0 through 192.168.255.0</screen> + B 172.16.0.0 through 172.31.0.255 + C 192.168.0.0 through 192.168.255.255</screen> <para>A valid IP address could be 192.168.1.1. A valid FQDN for this IP could be www.linuxfromscratch.org (not recommended because this is diff --git a/chapter07/udev.xml b/chapter07/udev.xml index ff50e7161..88e5a805b 100644 --- a/chapter07/udev.xml +++ b/chapter07/udev.xml @@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ and make this device available by creating the device node(s) for it.</para> <title>Problems with Creating Devices</title> <para>There are a few known problems when it comes to automatically creating -devices nodes:</para> +device nodes:</para> <para>1) A kernel driver may not export its data to <systemitem class="filesystem">sysfs</systemitem>.</para> |