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| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/acknowledgements.xml | 6 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/changelog.xml | 6 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/contactinfo.xml | 22 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | chapter01/versions.xml | 8 |
4 files changed, 25 insertions, 17 deletions
diff --git a/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml b/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml index 5f3d1fcea..7e05b5c19 100644 --- a/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml +++ b/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml @@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ Utley</ulink> <jeremy@linuxfromscratch.org> -- LFS Book editor, Bugzilla maintainer.</para></listitem> <listitem><para>Countless other people on the various LFS and BLFS -mailinglists who are making this book happen by giving their suggestions, +mailing lists who are making this book happen by giving their suggestions, testing the book and submitting bug reports, instructions and their experiences with installing various packages.</para></listitem> @@ -242,8 +242,8 @@ moved it was renamed to <emphasis>belgarath</emphasis>.</para></listitem> Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> <highos@linuxfromscratch.org> for donating a Yamaha CDRW 8824E CD-writer.</para></listitem> -<listitem><para>Countless other people on the various LFS mailinglists who are -making this book happen by giving their suggestions, submitting bug reports, +<listitem><para>Countless other people on the various LFS mailing lists who are +making this book better by giving their suggestions, submitting bug reports, and throwing in their criticism.</para></listitem> </itemizedlist> diff --git a/chapter01/changelog.xml b/chapter01/changelog.xml index ced1561e5..e65ce00dc 100644 --- a/chapter01/changelog.xml +++ b/chapter01/changelog.xml @@ -95,6 +95,12 @@ </itemizedlist> </para></listitem> +<listitem><para>October 8th, 2003 [alex]: Chapter 8 - Making bootable: Adapted +the style of the screens, and reworded some paragraphs.</para></listitem> + +<listitem><para>October 8th, 2003 [alex]: Removed a series of unused +entities.</para></listitem> + <listitem><para>October 7th, 2003 [jeremy]: Added notes to the linking tests in chapter 5 and 6 stating that blank output is a bad thing.</para></listitem> diff --git a/chapter01/contactinfo.xml b/chapter01/contactinfo.xml index 9da1994ce..5129b6f34 100644 --- a/chapter01/contactinfo.xml +++ b/chapter01/contactinfo.xml @@ -6,21 +6,23 @@ <sect2 id="ch01-faq"> <title>FAQ</title> -<para>If you encounter any errors, have any questions, or if you find a -typo in the book, then, please consult the FAQ (Frequently Asked Questions) -page at <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/faq/"/>.</para> +<para>If during the building of your LFS system you encounter any errors, or +have any questions, or think you found a typo in the book, then please first +consult the FAQ (Frequently Asked Questions) at +<ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/faq/"/>.</para> </sect2> + <sect2 id="ch01-irc"> <title>IRC</title> -<para>Members of the LFS community offer assistance on our community IRC -server. If you decide to utilize this mode of support, we ask that you -at least ensure you've checked the LFS FAQ and the mailing list archives -for the answer to your question. You can find the IRC server at -irc.linuxfromscratch.org port 6667. The support channel is named -#LFS-support.</para> +<para>Several members of the LFS community offer assistance on our community +IRC server. Before you utilize this mode of support, we ask that you've +at least checked the LFS FAQ and the mailing list archives for the answer to +your question. You can find the IRC server at +<emphasis>irc.linuxfromscratch.org</emphasis> port 6667. The support channel +is named #LFS-support.</para> </sect2> @@ -29,7 +31,7 @@ irc.linuxfromscratch.org port 6667. The support channel is named <title>Mailing lists</title> <para>The <emphasis>linuxfromscratch.org</emphasis> server is hosting a number -of mailinglists used for the development of the LFS project. These lists +of mailing lists used for the development of the LFS project. These lists include, among others, the main development and support lists.</para> <para>For information on which lists are available, how to subscribe to them, diff --git a/chapter01/versions.xml b/chapter01/versions.xml index ef5657a64..da0b07a66 100644 --- a/chapter01/versions.xml +++ b/chapter01/versions.xml @@ -2,10 +2,10 @@ <title>Book version</title> <?dbhtml filename="version.html" dir="chapter01"?> -<para>This is LFS-BOOK version &version; dated &releasedate;. If this -version is older than a month a newer version is probably already available -for download. Check one of the mirror sites below for updated -versions.</para> +<para>This is version &version; of the Linux From Scratch book, dated +&releasedate;. If this book is more than two months old, a newer and better +version is probably already available. To find out, check one of the mirrors +listed on <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/"/>.</para> </sect1> |